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Our Arrival
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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the women
who carry claymores
and lochaber axes into battle,

in the thick
of many fights
to defeat such things
as dishonesty's passing a
copper coin covered with quicksilver
to them for an amount greater than its
value are the women who...

...who have fought,
endeavored to relieve
your uneasiness, embracing
scenes so terrible, consequences
of great magnitude,

our arrival was
opportune, though
by no mistake, wounded
nevertheless driving the enemy
into terrible confusion, knowing there
was evil lurking years before, I never felt
it best to wait until the end of the battle to write,

that little graveyard
inspires, on the other
side, a trampled-down
cornfield; the orchard in
the field of dreams, the apple
branches budding where the rods,
the divining witcher sticks are once again
employed, the cellar laden with two gallons of
good whiskey raising up the spirits of the women
rebels,

you will not
find us tanning
bad leather, rather
you will find us at the
isolated village of Tecolote,
"the place of the owl" quelling
hostility with a brass-gripped
constitution; pinning on the stars
like top brass in the Civil War, if only
for a fleeting moment, a flash of promise
for what might have been, sparks leap from
my whetstone as I keep an edge on my blade.


Copyright 4.12.2010 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

 


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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
the turmoil of arrival gathers a vast array of curious and curiosities understood only by the owl and spirits of women ...

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Amazonian is right! Holy cow, I'm ready to pick a fight just for the hell of it! You sure can get folks fired up, Sage~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
the visuals inspired here are fabulous and powerful

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Sage,
This is a great poem. It has the language, energy, focus and drive of greatness. This I will read and savour over and over.
Kudos!

John

Reviewed on April 12, 2010
and I take two more swigs after Richard as he is not so shocked to see my weapons of choice...and here I rest upon a smooth ancient river boulder...sprawled and spread with warmth of the sun as a sheild, just as your words offer strength & endurance to see beyond all combats weather emotional or otherwise
Polsihing fosils & indian heads from the corn fields
merely a secret treasure to reveal...Love Vickie

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
If I ever get me one of those women who carry claymores and lochaber axes into battle, I'm gonna have one helluva time, for sure, especially if I can quench my throat first with a few shots of that good whiskey. Yes, then for certain there'll be sparks aleaping.

My dear Sage, your postings are always unique, historically significant and not to be missed.

Loved it!
Richard

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Amazonian,Sage. They did not lop off their arrow-arm breasts for nothing... xx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Are you a re-incarnated soldier from some past battle...? ed

Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Your poetry is always deep and full of meaning, and you express so well too. Really great talents which I hope to possess too.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
What a journey. Been gone again. And this I have missed the convoluted voyage through life to find and defend the truth and reach out to others. Another wonderful addition. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
There is so much to enjoy and to "process" in your verses here, Sage. There is a much enjoyable experience in reading this poem over and over again. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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