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Sabbath
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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angel wings
dust deep scratches
from the pulpit

oak wood grain
artistry of the preacher's sermon
carves everlasting reputation


Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Sabbath"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
sadly true

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
Yes, Vivid and accurate description of someone in the pulpit who cares about how they look, over and above anything of importance...
Very terse, excellent poem, vividly accurate in so many most unfortunate cases.
Reputation, eh! Your poem is correct here.
Joy,
Christine

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
Sounds like the preacher needs a manicure. Patrick

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
interesting read

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
There was always something that made a preacher seem so powerful and scary..I was always afraid to even sneeze during a sermon...
Nicely done Sage, your descriptive verses are spot on!!!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
didacticism gently wraps its arms about the flock of willing and unwilling - from the pulpit, with conviction the minds of men are indelible etched with wisdom, hope and acceptance - or even deceived by an errant figure of the priesthood - Sage, you capture the preacher's mien as well as his power in a poetic essence - when preachers are good and conviction is in their heart, a powerful bond with the parishioners is formed - when they are simply going through the motions, preacher and parishioners part with little more than disdain -- I so enjoy how you easily put your poetic arms about a subject, embrace it and delivery meaningful verbiage that expresses so vividly -- may peace love and joy be yours my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
The preacher's responsibility was huge...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
This piece reminds me when I was a child and forced to go to chuch mass every sunday morning. Nicely done, Sage.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
Only cool people are up this late!


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