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Fiction Paint: Mural Spirits
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Fiction Paint: Mural Spirits
(The Morphine Overdose of Madam Pearl DeVere)

surreal
burros with
hooves of mineral
spirits, gold lodged in
the foot of 1897 wealth,

assayers of toil
packing pick and ax,
the miner struck illusion,
gold fever shot the neighbor
who reached into the packbag
for peace of mind - killer whiskey,

intoxicated sluice
boxes all crooked in
a row fell over, they couldn't
stand, painted ladies opened
their legs, the boxes flowed, the
vials filled, gold fever spread, shrugging
off local moralists' objections to prostitution,

politics shored
the mining timbers
head frames, staking claims,
the train brought her to claim the
madam's body, pale and still from
the overdose of morphine, when the
sister met the mortician, he unveiled
the madam's auburn hair, "but she was
a dressmaker, who is this! Let Cripple Creek
bury its own!" in refusal of the body, the preacher,
"Let he or she who is without sin, cast the first stone!"


Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

 

 


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Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Sage, this old sinner loves this, and you, and your busy pen.
-gene.

Reviewed on September 20, 2010
corn whiskey I bet!

and it is a solid message here (in my eyes at least)
who is without sin? No-one...we all decorate ourselves
with lessons, and wisdom which oddly is learned through
being a sinner...no amount of teaching and reading
can ever impact as the due course of living and walking
in the shoes we wear.

But there are those who do not wear false faces
such as myself...I am an out in the open sinner
so to speak of course since I love hair dye :)
I like to enhance my auburn mane
once to black and once to blond
but red moves me...

Pleasure Sins of Passion and Desire
Vickie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 19, 2010
powerful & imaginative ,,, a true tour de force ...

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on September 19, 2010
Sage:

Amazing as usual...

let he who is without sin cast the first of stones
when Jesus walked that valley he took that walk alone
how many self-righteous will Saint Peter be lettin' in
more could boogie on the head of a pin....

Thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement that you had for Beth.

duke larance -- the drugstore cowboy poet

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 18, 2010
And the sister stared with anger

Hurled a stone

Struck the preacher between the eyes

"Sin is in the eye of the beholder"



As the noose slowly squeezed

Out her last breath

She heard the Sheriff whisper

"No maam"

"Sin is in the eye of God"

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 18, 2010
Once again, Sage, you allow us to inhabit the world of raw life, tough decisions and choices without fudge or nonsense.

John

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 18, 2010
interesting read

Reviewed by Artūrs Lūsis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2010
powerful, harsh satire; captivating narrative. i may have enjoyed it more in prose, maybe, but that matters not one bit, for it's here, it's vital & even slightly viral. almost as stream of consciousness on my tongue, thought is so free. gold fever of every sort, haha. perfectly tasteful, deliberate mayhem.

sarcastic, even bit cynical to me - 'for peace of mind - killer whiskey', line i enjoy the most; and hoisting the usual irony of drinking, for it really does give some 'peace of mind'.

thank you!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 18, 2010
There is no end to your imagination and creative mind. How do you do this? Another epic...

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

ps I just posted a poem and pic about my grandson..


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