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Bandit Religion: Animism of the Indian
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Bandit Religion: Animism of the Indian

they told her
leaves fall in the
fall, not the way of
a broken heart, but
renew your spirit gold,
emerge from a forbidding
barrier of religious thorns, 
pussy the most sublime gorge
to all of Beethoven's nine symphonies,
in trees, stone and Light,

gold miner's
rainbow after
the storm, mountain
lion's deep claw marks
in bandit religion, spears,
picks and axes of a thousand
warriors, broken-winged birds,
it stuns the eye where our bareness
lies exposed, f***ing demands perception
in stages,

Pisgah is
seduced by
ever-changing
hues, depends on
the light, season and
time of day, nights and moon,
the Gibson girl look-alikes and
the Indian girl on ponies,

"Our ride across time" -  animism of the
Indian we have come to understand,

they told her
leaves fall in the
fall, not the way of
a broken heart, but
renew your spirit gold,
emerge from a forbidding
barrier of religious thorns.


Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Bandit Religion: Animism of the Indian"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 2, 2010
Pisgah was deceived, the promised land was already in foreclosure and Moses held the note. Leaves, I understand. Patrick

Reviewed by Padre Scott West
Reviewed on September 22, 2010
Your poem speaks to me. Keep writing!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 22, 2010
Sage, an appeal to the senses and conscious thought process. "renew your spirit gold", speaks to all peoples and all religious beliefs. It is a universal call to self assessment and a need for reckoning. You have such a gift with perspective. The thorns that tear at the soul are grown from the impurities that dwell in the human heart, not our religions. A masterful work of poetic art. A rendering that demands understanding and acceptance of all people. Thanks for the delightful read my friend. May love and joy be the way of this day for you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
I understand this, happiness rests in the balance ~
You have touched me with this one.
Ever,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
With Authority and Confidence
Poet Sage delivers beauty!

John

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Wow girl you can write!! Sometimes a dummy like me needs to read your work 2 or 3 times to grasp it. But I do okay.


NAMASTE
TONY

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
excellent piece of writing...love the music in the background.

cheers,
dan

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Sage, that first stanza should be set to music.
Love that forbidding barrier of religious thorns.
Love you...gene.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Powerful poetry Ms Sage. I love how you began and ended with the same verse, that is the power in this pen.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Artūrs Lūsis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Your knowledge is gentel & truly wise, knowing no limits, with tasteful expression & deep inner voice.

thank you!


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