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Cornbread Crumbles
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Cornbread Crumbles

No apology
For heathen ways
Quaker brooms sweep
Crumbs off the floor


Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Cornbread Crumbles"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 2, 2010
It ain't easy being heathen what with those pesky brooms beating me to the punch. Patrick

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 24, 2010
"cornbread crumbles", but of course! And even when there are no heathens present. "Quaker brooms sweep" everything off the floor including cornbread crumbs. But not the heathens themelves, who have a right to be there if they so choose. And no apologies must they give. Sage, the sound and aroma of this "cornbread crumbles" poem is sweet. I hope your day knows the sound and feel of joy and love my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 24, 2010
That's the way the cornbread crumbles, Sage.
Apologize to whom? -gene.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 24, 2010
Life, and how it's lived is a personal thing...apologies? Only if they're heart felt...few lines, Sage...but oh so powerful!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 23, 2010
Far worse than the apology would be the excuse...well done.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on September 23, 2010
never apologize unless you intend to change and that would be a pity.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 22, 2010
when one crumbles under the pressure of the maze, the dough left is the bread of unfilled dreams ...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 22, 2010
I dropped a whole apple pie today.
I'm not saying sorry either, and I'm not even getting the broom.
This pleases me, thank you. Lovely ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on September 22, 2010
I love this verse.

Reviewed on September 22, 2010
in the eyes of this beholder of heathens
I have experienced it wouldn't matter
if they apologized...
I know I never apologize unless I mean it
and those far cries are countable on one hand

in touch with my inner heathen-Passion
Vickie


Reviewed on September 22, 2010
Short, but says volumes. Excellent poetry, Sage; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Yes, they are a tidy lot, Sage,
or they like to think they are.

John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
No one needs to apologize for how they live their lives, very pointed and direct...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
good one

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Yes but there so good with a cup of coffee. The dumb ass got it the first time...LOL


NAMASTE
TONY


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