Patchouli Blends Mt. Pisgah With Hindi (poem) by Sage Sweetwater on AuthorsDen

Patchouli Blends Mt. Pisgah With Hindi
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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oracle foretold, fire erupts in a lucid pit of Oedipus vipers, ratsbane, white arsenic, schism, breach in organization, ecclesiastical faction separated, bindi dots melt on women's foreheads on the billboards of Bollywood, transforms demon to pure gliterati goddess, sarees dance in the campfire flames, Vadanish seduces the spurs from our boots, culture clanking, our jingle bobs meet the bangles, her wrists clad in silver and gold, her dark complexion brands everlasting beauty into our ministry rawhide, The Sundance Wives see Vadanish in the stoned visions of sativa, four pipes with residue of healing blackness, inhalation of spirit when India coaxes us over, patchouli blends Mt. Pisgah with Hindi. Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist This poetry is inspired from Bollywood's Hisss! http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewarticle.asp?id=59430

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on November 22, 2010

Who needs a common Thai stick when you can have a Vadanish viper. And you won't be tempted to fast either. Patrick

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on November 16, 2010

Dear Sage, you do weave a spell with your words.
Yours in love and admiration. -gene.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

This is so effective and is deftly clever as always. That dangerous dust from Pisgah reminds me of pogonip.
Be well,
Christine

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

well done

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Interesting and even though I don't know a lot of the words you used I could sense a sensuality all its own here. Thank you for sharing sister Sage.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on November 15, 2010

Hi Sage:

The first verse reminds me of the "Bubble, bubble, toil & trouble" scene from MacBeth (I think....I do know it was something Willy Shakberg wrote).

The rest, the imagery is pretty clear, and very good....

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Well babe, I may not understand it, but I like it...does that make any sense...LOL, e

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

interesting-love it!