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Doe in Planetary Estrus: Religion Unwired
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Doe in Planetary Estrus: Religion Unwired

Cosmic scent attractants
Paths crossing
Whitetail advantage

Doe in Planetary Estrus
Communicating through urine
Pissing on religion unwired

Deer have never smelled
That rank ammonia odor
Elixir sold in bottles at minstrel shows

Natural odor
Laying scent trails
Slinging it into orbit on cosmic brush

Unwired for God
Bounty for the invisible hand
Supernatural agent in answered prayer

Grim Reaper
Stalking in chaos
Profiling for the latest contrived data on religiosity

Religion is nothing but a way
To deal with stress
Opium of the people argument

Neurobiological findings
Deity designed that belief into brains
Neuroimaging preloaded with software

Circuitry silenced
Doe in Planetary Estrus
Religion Unwired


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 Reviews of "Doe in Planetary Estrus: Religion Unwired"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on December 24, 2010
Oh deer.

My preacher is bigger than yours!

Patrick

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
As they say, religion is too powerful a weapon for elites not to use it to subdue and control the masses. This is excellent poetry. Where can I get a bottle of Piss Musk au Toilette?

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
Metaphorically hot, as always, Sage.
The problem with religion, say I,
is of course religion. -gene.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
totally agree with your perceptions in this poem and really impressed with the imagery and metaphor ... religion does indeed attempt to excite the will of the masses with its overwhelming presence in their lives ...

Reviewed on November 30, 2010
Sage you are a deep thinker and you force your readers to think deeply too. God and religion, seem to be always at odds with each other.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
Every individuals beliefs come from within their heart and soul and through plain common sense. To follow any religion blindly is like the doe and will lead many into an occult atmosphere, which is a surrender of will. Interesting...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
Not sure I agree with your conclusions, but i do like the poem...

Chip Bergeron


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