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Priestly Etchings
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Priestly Etchings

the procedure
with minimal scars
she relaxes her artistry

steady hand
she cuts away pain
with the etching needle

madonna in the clouds
holding a baby
she is just so fond of midwifery

their own childhood and their now
she dips in acid to eat away the lines
it just bites into the metal of savagery

several hundred impressions of group memory
she decorates the gun metal with priestly etchings
letting the acid bite lightly

she smokes it with
four beeswax tapers
applying the flame to darken the ground

washed with methylated spirits
she cleanses what time cannot
priestly etchings defiled by the church

degradation too great
zinc etching times are shorter
copper stands up

gun and bible
retracing their lines
and healing timelines


Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

 

 


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 Reviews of "Priestly Etchings"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 11, 2010
there is a feminine softness underlying here-i like it

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
etches of god and gun as one do indeed have healing capability ... no one dare shoot upon it ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Gun and bible and unusual combination, yet steadfast to those who hold true. Blessing to you...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Sage,
Your spirituality has no limits as true spirituality shouldn't and doesn't.
And how well this is written!

John

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Well done and evocative......your imagery always leaves me in awe...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
this reminds me of a story about the battle of stalingrad. the germans under friedrich paulus had been surrounded for about 2 months by the russian forces, freezing, starving, sick and dying. when all hope was lost, an etching appeared of a madonna on a piece of wood. nobody knew where it came from or who had fashioned it; but they clung to it as some sort of sign, a last straw of providence or hope as christmas settled in to cover them in ice and final death. this was really well written sage. masterfully done.

Reviewed by Clarrissa Moon
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
This was very deep and provacative Thanks for sharing!


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