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The Symbol Dawn Paraphrased by Sage Sweetwater
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Sage Sweetwater writing and paraphrasing a poem written from Sri Aurobindo's The Mother Reading Savitri - Book I: Canto I The Symbol Dawn. Sage Sweetwater is a student in lifetime pursuit of study of Sri Aurobindo's Savitri.

The Symbol Dawn Paraphrased by Sage Sweetwater

twilight-hypnotized ether
mysteriously birthing rays
alternative-bound priestess garment

cloaked formless seeker
beautiful dreamer disrobing
reaching for what lies outside the realm

everlasting meridian
great circle of the celestial sphere
dim flame unconscious-developed darkness

water borders the primitive race
caught in intoxicating waves of libation
bane's sickness of ill-fate

muted intuition
motionless and strategic
bringing it on - the Light

Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

Canto I The Symbol Dawn

It was the hour before the gods awake 
 Athwart the vain enormous trance of space  
 Then something in the inscrutable darkness stirred 
 An unshaped consciousness desired light 
 Arrived from the other side of boundlessness  
 The darkness failed and slipped like a falling cloak  
 A glamour from the unreached transcendences  
 Earth felt the Imperishable's passage close  
 Here where our half-lit ignorance skirts the gulfs  
 And Savitri too awoke among these tribes  
 Thus trapped in the gin of earthly destinies 
 Against the evil at life's afflicted roots 
 At the summons of her body's voiceless call 
 Immobile in herself she gathered force-Sri Aurobindo


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 Reviews of "The Symbol Dawn Paraphrased by Sage Sweetwater"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 31, 2011
Sage, your perspectives awaken many curiosities and kindle creative regions of my sleepy old gray matter. Unchallenged in the routines of day to day life. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed on June 30, 2011
very interesting! enjoyed. Morgan

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on June 25, 2011
Good jiob, Sage...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 22, 2011
Wow Sage, I really like this.

Cheers,
Dan


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