I’ve got to move on,
Pull myself up out of
The steamy, moss-covered swamp
Of our relationship…
I am tired of playing hide-n-seek,
Ring-around-the-rosie,
And hoodman’s bluff with you.
Can’t you see that I am growing brittle,
And like bones that cannot bend,
I am more fragile than the finest silk.
Crossing over, walking on the stench
Of the rotting vegetation,
Drifting over bodies bloated and floating…
These emotions are out of control.
You come and go, like I am nothing
To you, nothing but a shoulder to cry upon when
Things get tough…
So cry, go ahead and cry…
But you can’t do it here any longer.
I’m crossing over--I’m moving on.
Dena L Moore
September 14, 2003
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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2005
So cry, go ahead and cry…
But you can’t do it here any longer.
I’m crossing over--I’m moving on. ..
YAY!!!..brilliant move AND write!
Vesna*
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Quite nice, Dena.
Greetings.
Goreja.com
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Stand strong and cross over.
Well written verse........
A way to use your mind for silent communication. Speaking about the methods in the book I have used since a young age.
21st Century learning. I also have a GoFundMe page to ask for funds so I can research with other people and add their experiences
But you can’t do it here any longer.
I’m crossing over--I’m moving on. ..
YAY!!!..brilliant move AND write!
Vesna*
Greetings.
Goreja.com
Well written verse........
Best regards,
Leland