Crackling
Crackling
In a big pile of leaves
A faint moldy smell coming from the damp interior
Socks soggy from the wet that crept in the side of the shoe that has lifted away from the sole
Souls put into the effort of jumping feet first into the crackling
Rolling around, breathing it in,
Broken pieces of brittle leaf clinging to our clothes and hair
Building leaf houses then demolishing them
And now, I’m trying to summon up some of that leaf energy of old
But all I get is a sense of creeping damp and cold
and that unrelenting mold of sodden leaves
Where has the crackling gone?
Janet Bellinger
C 2005
Regis
See that pile of mucky, mouldy leaves. Just close your eyes and jump right in (go on, don't worry about what the neighbours will think) and they will be crackling and autumn-smelling again.
Forget the "inner child," its us that go inside, not the child.
Ian
(one who never went inside)
A splendid and nostalgic write, that takes you back down memory lane...:)
We will just have to summon those hidden reserves of energy ...lols
Peter
Great poem! Very nostalgic. A longing for that certain vitality we all
once had.
Birgit and Roger
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)