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Love that demands...and demands...and...
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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To someones, reciprocity is a four letter word, or they think they are entitled to receive love in bulk but, if they thought it necessary, will dispense a quantity measured not to cause an overdose.
Gimme gimme gimme...


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You, that asked
for my unconditional love
but said goodbye,
no waiting for
at least for my heart
to give a palpitant sound,
or for any word
coming from my hand...
You, always the asking one
demanding from love a sign,
but only giving your absence
in return, no life...
You, always looking,
always in search
around the world,
for the one that only gives,
for the one accepting all,
for the one on its knees
and asking not,
You, You, yes You!
don't demand
for my love anymore!!!








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 Reviews of "Love that demands...and demands...and..."
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2007
Run as fast and far away as you can!

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
So beautifully expressed
Yes it takes two in a relationship
And love should be given and received
It cannot be one sided
And should not be claimed
Excellent message within this
Very profound poetic thought!!
Love and Peace To You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Yikes, sounds like a sadly illuminating experience.
Well done, Georg.
Peace (I mean, Really!)
Carolyn

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
You've expressed it well my friend! As the others have stated, love is a give and take relationship, it can't be one sided...
Excellent write my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
In order for a relationship to "work," it seems to me love has got to go both ways. Well-expressed, Georg. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Excellent pen indeed..Hugsssss

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Love goes both ways,both have to give and share,always wanting and not giving is a little selfish,
Well said

Michael

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
An excellent write, Georg, and I must say, good riddance to her. There are finer fish in the sea for a charming poet with a caring and loving heart such as you. Very well expressed.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
You paint an aberrant personality type here Georg that I have had several encounters with in my past. These types are the soul killers that suck dry the life of another, and do so without caring or remorse. A strong right on write.

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Another oustanding write Georg
Really like this one
Most enjoyable
Peace

William

Reviewed by Guy Hogan
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
I am so conflicted about love, any kind of love, that this poem hits too close to home for me. But I guess that's what poetry is suppose to do: make us take a good look at ourselves even if we don't want to.

Reviewed on March 8, 2007

A demanding one offers nothing of soul's value, for togetherness is a mingling of soul and body. Giving-receivig centers union.

"Love that demands...and demands...and..." sings wisely.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Is there really such a thing as unconditional love? I often ponder that. Some do not understand that I may still love a past love in my life I surely didn't like them anymore and they became no longer my friend I chose to be with. Was that a conditional love? Lady J


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