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Drowning Rain
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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To be alone is not the abcense of people around, is that utterly feeling of emptiness, like a cold hand grabbing hard at your soul making you sad.


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Empty streets engulfed in shadows,
with merciless rain that keeps on falling
on drowning sidewalks where feet go
on swimming, hardly walking.

Overloaded with water, tree branches
by gust of wind they are waving
to a solitary passer by, like a wet
shadow that goes away...melting.

The skies are crying their sorrow,
a gown made of clouds are wearing,
with diamonds jewells made of lighting
and water pearls, for a grandiose wedding.

Thunderous sobs explosions in the night,
with the absence of the groom...no wedding!
only me is left, and uninvited drenched guest
that the empty streets go on roaming.

Late, the graveyard hours had passed,
the houses are dark, like dreading
that someone lost will come calling
and their warmth forced to be sharing.

Rain, hard, cold, like an unloving mother,
in a night dressed up with utmost uncaring,
I lift my face to see the sorrowful skies
and wonder if we are together...dispairing.




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 Reviews of "Drowning Rain"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! ' The skies are crying their sorrow, a gown made of clouds are wearing' VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Georg,
Once again a very powerful and moving poem. You have captured the inner lonliness and sadness so well. I could 'feel' his despair.

Outstanding!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Yes Georg, there is a very big difference between being alone and being lonely. Lovely write, enjoyed this.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Very written....I can feel the void within this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
I certainly agree with your premise Georg ...

This kind of aloneness has nothing at all to do with how many people are around. Your poem has persuasive imagery and insights that I feel come from personal suffering.

I agree with Andre - a rich inside revelation that has colors and undertones of Edgar Allen Poe. Powerful and moving!

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
detailed and indepth look at the feeling of empty

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
To be in a room full of people and not feel connected to one is true loneliness. Intense write through it all. LadyJ

Reviewed on March 30, 2007

This is a rich picture of an inside revelation... An outstanding poemization duly poetized.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 30, 2007
A powerful write, indeed, Georg, well done! We're getting that now--keep Karen and I in your prayers!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Rain, hard, cold, like an unloving mother,
in a night dressed up with utmost uncaring,

A very powerful, hard hitting piece, Georg.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
It's this way for so many, needlessly, just gotta make connections...

Reviewed on March 30, 2007
You covered loneliness in a very detailed unique way George, watchout for the wolfman, dracula and frankenstein monster


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