Heart Work (haiku) (poem) by Georg E Mateos on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

This a beautifully written haiku
Breaking up is very emotional and painful
Creative choice of words which
provide with nice imagery!!
Excellent message!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend...Morning star

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

This one is so sad. Breaking up IS hard to do, isn't it?

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Oh Georg excellent Ku and message....
Peace,
josie

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

George, this is excellent -- and words we can all relate to. very well done, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by HB Clayton

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

The heart is probably the strongest yet most fragile organ of the body. It also has the capacity to create beautiful Haiku. HB

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Very well written reality for many!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Love is pain, what can you do...Ed

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

it does do that, this was creative

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

A creative write my friend, a different style for you...but that is one of the wonderful things about writing...enjoyed this much.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Gloria Buono

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Very creative and delightful. So much for blood pressure. Thank Ku for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Love them too much or too littel
what can I tell you
Enjoyed your Ku
Peace Be with You

William

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

I think we've all been there and experienced this condition Georg. Sadly some more than others. You express it quite uniquely. I love the image of the hysterical woodpecker in your opening summary. Cracked me up! Blessings to you Poet ...

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Chagrin d'amour has sadly broken many a heart.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

It would take a sphygmomonometer to record it as such, but Georg, you did it with the heart itself!
Very intuitive in a sad way...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Georg,
Love is not always finding someone who you deserve , but finding someone who deserves YOU. With your kindness I'm sure that will happen. Excellent haiku!

Many blessing,
~Linda

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Well done, you've got to the heart of love, then the pain of the split after you've been bled dry...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

The highs and lows of love that can effect our blood pressure. Good one Georg.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

Georg,

PERFECT capture of love--and loss. Well done!!

(((HUGS))) and love :), Karla.