Ms. Karla the Storm Spinner ask me to see into her eyes and tell...
This poem is dedicated to a courageous woman, a Veteran, a friend and also, why not!...a sister.
Inside her eyes she wished
what I see to know…
The poet was asked, tell me the truth and
I looked trying to find traces of a storm,
but in that peaceful face I couldn’t find,
no fury, no lightning or a maelstrom;
just a pensive woman patiently waiting
carrying inside, in peace, a pensive soul;
no tears there, in those squinting eyes,
the ones that mattered had fell much before,
now her kerchief is only getting wet when
she dry the tears of others suffering more.
The man was asked, to tell the truth about
looking into those eyes and what he saw,
seeing eyes that were almost questioning
he saw her looking far away and beyond,
to where rain fells on fertile, waiting earth,
a place for tenderness and even for love,
where children can break in all sweet smiles
like they were part of a great rainbow,
no sickness, or greed, not even selfishness,
hate has no place in that Karla’s world.
The friend was asked, “tell me the truth,
what you see in my eyes when you look?”
and I looked expecting to see devastation
after a life shaken by so many a storm
but the only I could see inside her eyes
was the hiding smile of a tender soul,
and the stretched hand, firm, as it should
the stretched hand of whom a friend you call;
so, dear friend, that is all I can see, because,
to tell you a lie…I do know if I could.
Beautiful write Georg as Karla is. You have captured an essence which can be clearly seen by all. PLB&G for caring and sharing one of the Den's most beautiful people as you are also. <Mikii>
You have written a wonderfully creative, yet very sensitive piece about a strong, fine woman with a very giving heart. Karla is a beautiful person, no doubt about it.....
What exceptional insight Georg. Finding the spirit of another in a picture is quite a feat. What soul food this write is ... I salute you Poet! Blessings ...
Richard
Georg,
This is quite a talent you have for looking into people's eyes...I loved this, for you captured a true picture of our Karla. Very beautifully portrayed..Thank you for your kindness and insight.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Oh My Beautiful Georgie! You are gentle, beautiful and so wise! LOVE YOU! SC
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2007
You did well Georg; to have the ability to see and read somones eyes is a rare and special gift usually left to a professional, but as I said before, you've done well! love Holly
This is a beautiful, honest tribute to a woman I am proud to call my sister; not only my "sister," but my "TWIN sister"! You have touched me deeply with this, as you have her. Thank you from the bottom of my heart! God bless you!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I am in tears, here: this is a beautiful look into the eyes of a StormSpinner. You found the soul of a poet. :) I am awed; I am humbled; I am honored. Thank you: you can bet I'm saving this one!! LOL
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Love Tinka
Be safe,
Karen
Thnak you Georg, for this wonderful write
Peace be with you
William
Richard
John
This is quite a talent you have for looking into people's eyes...I loved this, for you captured a true picture of our Karla. Very beautifully portrayed..Thank you for your kindness and insight.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Blessings,
Joyce B.
I think each of us would like to know what others see when they look into our eyes. We might be truly surprised.
I've seen Karla's soul through her writings, and am inspired by her.
With love,
Kathy
Ann
This is a beautiful, honest tribute to a woman I am proud to call my sister; not only my "sister," but my "TWIN sister"! You have touched me deeply with this, as you have her. Thank you from the bottom of my heart! God bless you!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Believe me, I am saving this!
Love, LOVE the name "Storming Gentle Woman!" :)
Walt
I am in tears, here: this is a beautiful look into the eyes of a StormSpinner. You found the soul of a poet. :) I am awed; I am humbled; I am honored. Thank you: you can bet I'm saving this one!! LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
fee
Top notch old chum...