My head and my heart ache after reading this. "... a leper cannot be conquered with kindness packed inside a face that shows repugnance ..." This jumped out at me. How can we expect to have peace when we declare war?
Oh My Darlin! This sad write impaled my heart with grief and sadness!
The thought of beautiful you feeling such sadness and pain, breaks my heart! I will brave the thorns to embrace you and hold you near! I LOVE YOU! SC
I still have that devastating image in my mind
fresh as the day of this horrific
tragedy the pain and tears will never stop
Excellent write..
Love Peace and hugsssss to you....Morning Star
'sip of bitterness' and 'where caresses aren't allowed'. These are great expressions. Also I like 'in their bellies to the skies'. Thanks for sharing and cheers.
There is a sense of loss of control with the 9-11 atacks. People who were living a dream began to know that the world was a bigger place than they thought:for liberty was bought with action. It means defending what you believe in with words and Deed. Those who allow their freedoms to be stolen have already chosen their path.
Agreeing with George Carroll, this is deep and the pangs of pain come rumbling through on the page. If it was dark that you were shooting for, you hit the target. Good write.
oh Boy, I remember watching the towers crash,and knowing in
that instant many many brother firefighters were dying,horible ,horible day,,thanks Georg for
the heart felt write,
stan
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Kathy
The thought of beautiful you feeling such sadness and pain, breaks my heart! I will brave the thorns to embrace you and hold you near! I LOVE YOU! SC
a very nice work Georg...
Art Sun...
fresh as the day of this horrific
tragedy the pain and tears will never stop
Excellent write..
Love Peace and hugsssss to you....Morning Star
Be safe,
Karen
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Love Tinka
Love,
Susan
remembered...
John
by a master poet
Thank you Georg for this thought provoking write
Peace be with you
William
Thanks,
Dan
~Thought-provoking~
Wow this packs a lot of power Georg!
Certainly can understand all of the words portrayed here in this write.
The imageries depicted and verbiage used are awesome which makes this work tick like a time bomb!
~Gwendolyn
Never forget and God bless America again!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
Fee
that instant many many brother firefighters were dying,horible ,horible day,,thanks Georg for
the heart felt write,
stan
A powerfully penned write covering all emotions; well done.
I will always remember and never forget: believe me.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.