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Love illusion, is it so bad?
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Esoteric philosophical theories tell us that love is just a feeling we wish to have and it is just that, an illusion.
We build with hope, using material from dreams, a perfect match to our heart desires of a tender companion, of a coming caress, of a secret kiss.
If it never comes we will be miserable.
If it does...is it so bad?


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Somber is the forest of my mind,
leaves of experience covers all,
even the light of a fleeing memory
can illuminate that corner of my soul.

Then, I dreamed of you, an illusion,
which came with hands offering love,
and I felt for the first time in life that
someone cared, that I wasn’t alone.

Our forest was warm, yet we couldn’t
see anywhere a little ray of the sun,
which could warm a bed of leaves
so we could lie down our tired souls.

Hummingbirds from flower to flower,
we, in the shadows, pale mushrooms,
giving each other a last tender caress
because tomorrow we will be gone.

You a beautiful Princess, a fantasy
that I, a frog, saw coming to the pond,
if you give me a kiss I will be no Prince,
just for your kindness a grateful frog.

I dreamed of you all my life, and I will
the rest of it, dreaming is all I ever got,
my love for you is so tender that it smelts
the ice of my heart dreaming that you come.

I know that one day we will meet, and that
you will be there, and a dreaming will be not,
my arms will take you in, a kiss will be the price,
because I have waited painfully for so long.

Love illusion, is it so bad?
I will sleep on that.


  

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 Reviews of "Love illusion, is it so bad?"
Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
Oh Georgie! You are my hero and handsome Prince Charming! I simply adore you! LOVE! SC

Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Love Does See With Different Sights.
Love is Beautiful no matter the package,

honestly thou as I am no princess by no means....
But your poem made me want to kiss a frog :)
Vickie


Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
If you substitute "effect" for "illusion" then love's effect is not so bad. It is indeed extraordinary.

Kathy

Reviewed on October 8, 2007
Love is more real than our heartbeat Georg. What we feel is not illusion, though the one we feel it for or having it returned may be an illusion. Love is what makes life worth living and love is never wrong. A beautiful and deep write.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
...there is no wrong in the illusion of a dream...for sometimes...love is illusive in reality...yet we choose not to believe it.
beauty of daydreams in this pen Georg.
John

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Perchance to dream, eh Goerg?
You sliver tounged devil.

Walt

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
i adore this type of poetry, illusion is the beginning of everything...i've heard we dream our reality into being

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
sleep my dear Georg...sleep in the dream...then, awake it its reality, when you cast your soul on its soul, and dream again!
Bittersweet poem by an ultra sweet poet! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Beautiful, sad at times but I like the hope at the end, "I know that one day we will meet...". Keep the hope alive. Love illusion is beautiful. Jean

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
This poem is beautiful and enchanting!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed on October 7, 2007
I, for one, do not see - or, better still, sense - love as an illusion, my dear friend. I sense it, in my whole being, as a reality, like an intrinsic essence without which I wouldn't be alive at all. And, in this absolutely marvelous poem, I don't quite see - sense - the sadness of disillusion... but rather a poignant longing for something that, deep within, you believe may come to take substance. No, love is not bad at all... in fact, it is anything but bad, if only we do not take it for an illusion... or an illusion for... love.
Lots of love & {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}} from your amiga Lusitana,
Alexandra*

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Thoughts and feelings depicted in "Love illusion, is it so bad?" shows the picture of one's reality poemized with emotions that were tested under the darkness of indifference. This poem probably describes billions of frustrated relationship.

"Love illusion, is it so bad?" has enriched Poetry history in the chapter sad romantic relations.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Simply...magical, Georg...you have really shown your inner soul with this one my friend...to me this is one of your best love poems I have read...you show great thought and depth combined...even with the simplicity of words you show us the real you...


nice ...

truly nice...


Art Sun...

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Beautiful Georg...you romantic soul, love this one, blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
This is amazing,, and the writing speaks for itself, just a beautiful story,,,so an illusion of love??,, is not so bad,, rather it is very nice,,, and a blanket of warm leaves to lay on,,,,,,,


Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
You've expressed the longing and desperation so well. I've always thought love was an illusion too. But there are people out there who say it is for real. I'll never know. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Georg,this is excellent writing,very nice indeed..stay safe and well...Hugssss

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
So very well expressed, the subject is a hard one to capture and illuminate but you have done a wonderful job of it with this write.

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
I think love can be a many splendored thing, even for a frog waiting hopefully at a pond. And dreams add much spice to life!

Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Excellent write, Georg; well done; no, very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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