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>>>>>>>>>> That is what I am here for... < < < < < < < To comment on the poem, "Values Gone".
I like this free style rhymed composition... "Values Gone" flows wisely on the musical tracks of a wondrous river of poetic enchantment.
I can see the honesty and strong beliefs in your poem. I try to live by the Golden Rule and although I was raised as a Catholic, I now have no religious affiliation. I don't feel the need to accept Jesus or any other prophet and rely on my inner self to keep me sane. I'm sorry, but someone else that shares your religion may be better suited to make your poem into a song.
Powerful thought provoking write...most of the times I do wonder too...love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
The Streets of Gold. How magnificently true. This is wonderful and should be out there where all can see. From Washington DC to Washington state.
God Bless You and Your family
Merriest of Christmas' and most Blessed of years
Tracey
Our values have gone into the pockets of attorneys who want to make cash on the separation of church and state. Also they make cash by sueing teachers who need to apply a good swat to those misbehaving causing discern among other students. They also make cash by putting fear into parents who need to apply minor punishment at home. Yes there are good attorneys, but lets face it. When that profession is one of the most well paid, and their pay usually comes from someones pain and suffering, maybe we need to start a national front against them and their petty law suits.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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COMMERCIAL, OR PERSONAL ABUSIVE MESSAGES ARE STRICTLY FORBIDDEN AND MAY BE REMOVED AND RESULT IN LOSS OF MEMBERSHIP. ANYTHING QUESTIONABLE SHOULD BE privately reported here. THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT!”
>>>>>>>>>> That is what I am here for... < < < < < < < To comment on the poem, "Values Gone".
I like this free style rhymed composition... "Values Gone" flows wisely on the musical tracks of a wondrous river of poetic enchantment.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I can see the honesty and strong beliefs in your poem. I try to live by the Golden Rule and although I was raised as a Catholic, I now have no religious affiliation. I don't feel the need to accept Jesus or any other prophet and rely on my inner self to keep me sane. I'm sorry, but someone else that shares your religion may be better suited to make your poem into a song.
Happy Holidays to you and your family!
God Bless You and Your family
Merriest of Christmas' and most Blessed of years
Tracey
nicely done...
Chanti