The tears (poem) by Sandi Lyn Schraut on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 27, 2003

Very well done!

Reviewed by Rita Hestand

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

A coming out of the darkness mood, very good!

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on June 1, 2003

I alweays knew you'd find your wings sweetie

Reviewed by Linnea

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

Sandi this is a great poem. Beautiful and says so much. I hear you what you are saying. Take care!

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2003

Beautiful write,good to see you Sandi,,Charlie

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on May 16, 2003

Well done my friend.

Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Deborah Lindsey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Beautifully done. It speaks of HOPE>

Reviewed by Herbert Henning (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

Hello, Sandi, I really like this one, it really describes being unhappy, but tells of happiness. It has true emotion and powerful words. It also has deep meaning. As a title of a poem by Frank Stantion says, keep a goin. Dean

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Reviewed on May 11, 2003

Meter and the music of language have obviously worked their way more into your writing than when first I saw it. I still see what is, for my money, an over-dependence on abstraction - a word we all "know" like guilt or anger substituting for a simpler more direct thing we can feel. Still, you did a great job here of doing the hardest thing in poetry, an uncomplicated paean to happiness. Don't get me wrong - plenty of people try, and they end up writing for Hallmark, if they're lucky. This is definitely past that crowd - well done!

Reviewed by Gene

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Very very nice lots of emotions in this one..

Reviewed by Bunk

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Sandi, that was a beautiful and touching poem. Thank you greatly for sharing it with me.
Bunk

Reviewed by Marla Nelson

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

I think it's beautiful. I feel that in my personal life I am coming out of a "dark" time and entering a brighter, happier time so this poem came at the right moment!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Without tears can one fly? Great inspiration!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Sandi beautiful expression here that leads to a wonderful write!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

well written inspiration...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

"...A change has come to free
this heart,
from chains that cruely
held.
Now free, this life has grown
and flies,
on endless winds, on sunlit wings
of life..."

Wonderful lines.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

We seem to be sharing a name Sandi :)

Loved this very moving to a soul....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Tears are healing, aren't they? Thank you for your beautiful expression Sandi.
-Bear