ATTAINING PERFECTION
Though the golden temples
of philosophy were again to
rise, offering us sanction--
and the absolute acme of
human attainment, we'd not
earn the key to heaven...
even with the cooperation
of science and religion--
and the blessing of angels.
For even then, this world
of erring humanity wouldn't
advance to a perfect society.
We will approach perfection
only when every human soul
is free, and war is history.
-- Delma Luben
I like where this takes me and especially how it ends, such a true and positive conclusion.
John
A wise poetic expression. "Attaining Perfection" shines.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
of philosophy were again to
rise, offering us sanction--
and the absolute acme of
human attainment,
Very nice verse, thanks, ~D.