oh mom
if I could tell you
that I知 ok
if I could tell you
that it breaks my heart
to feel your pain
mom
no one ever knows
about all the next minutes of our lives
no one ever knows
but I知 in this place now
not knowing where I go from here
and oh how I wish
that I could tell you
that I love you
that I could thank you
for all the love you give me
even now
how I wish
I could sooth your heart
stop this anguish and fear
step back into yesterday
when life was sane
I知 telling you mom
that I love you
I知 thanking you mom
for my life
and you have to know that
I知 ok
because of you
all my love
james
a business associate ralated to me this morning that her friends 16 year old son had a heart attack this morning and is in a coma with body functions shutting down...his mothers name is Linda
wow truly sad........soooooo very young
wonderfuly sad write....
get well he will be in my prayers
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
So sad, life doesn't seem fair sometimes. Thank you for your comment about my sketches. I don't see a picture of you.
Reviewed by Nisa Howe (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
Wonderful write... I feel the tears... as one who has lost a father I understand...waiting...Loving... talking and crying and not knowing if he heard...
This is such an empathic relation of those threads between conscious life and an expression of the unconscious need to say "I love you". I hope and pray he will be able to relay that consciously upon recovery.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
Josie this tore at my heart.They will all be in my prayers. Floria
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
Josie, this is a very moving write. I hope and pray that he recovers completely and that his mother is strengthened and comforted during this terrible ordeal.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
how terrible. Hope he pulls through.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
A very painful thing to go through. Be strong and good write Josie.
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
Hi Josie,
I will pray for her and him. I have gone through much of the same and wish all things well. God bless. Gregg
Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
that is horrible
this poem is heartfelt I hope there is a turnaround
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wonderfuly sad write....
get well he will be in my prayers
debby
Heartfelt poem. I hope he recovers.
Sandie Angel :o(
I will pray for her and him. I have gone through much of the same and wish all things well. God bless. Gregg
this poem is heartfelt I hope there is a turnaround