legacy (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2002

well done with this, its a great well written read so honestly done, and done so well, take care of you and yours, Mark xx

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on October 21, 2002

this was very wonderfully written
I hope your children have enough insight to know what a wonderful mother they have
I also hope my children don't read your poem or I will probably be burried in the damn bunny outfit.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2002

Your child will always
remember you.........
They have too!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 19, 2002

10-19-02

As a Child Of 5 My Mother Told Me She Wanted To Alway's Die,i.e. I Told Her Whence (God)
Call's You Go, Until Then,It Will Never Come Too (Know)Pass...

As Human Being I Never Wanted To Bring anymore Children Into This Holy Hell World,i.e. There are So Many On The Other Side To Care For; More Than Human Life Itself...
TRASK

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2002

Wonderful, our life in little capsules of words!! Preserved for those we love.

Reviewed by Victor Jensen

Reviewed on October 19, 2002

I guess we all want to be remembered after death and writing poetry is just as good a way as any. - Vic

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2002

great and funny write
Here's a big Hug For a Non-Hugger
from a simple little bugger

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on October 18, 2002

Fantiastic write

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2002

This is very touching. Sometimes it seems that I have spent my whole life trying to find a way to be seen after I am gone. Do
you see me now? Will you see me tomorrow, when you reread your poem? Bill

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2002

I love this one, Josie! Wish my mom had left a legacy like this for me! Bravo!

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2002

Your words are a hugger hun. The kids are so lucky to have you as a mom without any doubt. Death is inevitable...so let's acknowledge what we have and not give up on the happiness for the fear of dying. Superb write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2002

Josie,
another excellent write
of reality I love these..
Peg

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on October 18, 2002

Every parents wish - well said.
BTW- they become human again when they're old enough to buy you a drink.