just her kid (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Such a touching moment. You express yourself well. The mood and emotions are jumping through the screen. Nice write.

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

A mothers love and all your memories. Great write.
Nancy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Josie, Josie, Josie...I love your stuff. When you gonna publish?

~E

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Josie, this is a very touching poem - priceless

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

touching... no one/nothing can replace love of a mother..

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

*tears* oh, josie...this really touched me...my mom died 13 years ago...59 years old...and how i miss her. she used to brush my hair, and i hated it...she'd pull, i'd jerk the other way, causing it to hurt more...what i wouldn't give to have mom pull my hair some more...*tears* (((HUGS))) and thanks for writing this tender expression of love...love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

i am still crying over this one. i am having a really bad weekend and this made me think of someone besides myself. way to go josie

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

To love a mother! So true. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

This is a beauty.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Great write Josie!.....It's lovely to feel that way.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

this is a beautiful poem josie and i cherish the fact that i still have my mum and i see her every day. well done

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Oh!! Josie I wish I still had my mom.....but no luck for me I am alone no mom no dad....just sad memories of a sad childwood in a boardingschool since the age of six...
This moved my emotions to tears...
Love
tinka

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Josie.. i am so happy you have these times with your Mom.. always keep them in your heart.. this one made me almost cry..

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

A beautiful journey down the memory lane. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

i miss my mom, too. it will be 13 years since she died on st. patrick's day in 1990. at least you still have your mom; be good to her while you still have her! i wish i still had mine! good write, josie! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :( >tears <

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

This is a treasure Josie...Oh how I miss my mom;-)!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Jo I remember days like that too...How wonderful to have such a loving mother and such great memories..growing up is hard to do..we inherit all the problems with the freedoms...Great write..Floria