darkness (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 17, 2003

Josefina Maria....
Good piece, six days before my birtday written.....Good strong piece!
Rodney Evan Bohen
The pens is the hawk, we merely need to dare mount her to fly. Fly high Josefina fly high...
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Mom

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Josie, just remember we all love ya! Mom

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

I hope the darkness lifts little lady.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Let the light shine in
Too dark here........
Where is your flashlight?
Hope it gets better!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

So dark and lovely, Your poetry just moves me so...

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Think of it this way...sun only and you burn up...we need times of darkness for balance, so long as you come back to the light;-)great write Josie, and I agree with E.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Being captuired and dragged down by inner darkness is a battle i know too well about awesome job on this peom it totally explains how i am at days

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

josie i hope this is just a write not an experience. miss you girl, hope to be back in chat shape soon.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Great write....now how about :) for us Jo...love this..Floria

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Gave me a dark and withdrawn feeling.

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Excellent write. Loved the way you expressed the emotion with detail.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

I don't think you will ever have your joy extinguished, Josie. You are too attuned to everything around you.

~E

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

urf. Intense

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

but the question is....why

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Josie,
"I open my arms
to the darkness
it understands my pain
descending
wrapping icy fingers
angry grappling thoughts
choking my light
crushing hope
extinguishing
joy "
Sometimes the darkness offers a more lighted aura
peg
Love this one.

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

We tend to find comfort in darkness, for to venture out means to expose ourselves to all. In darkness we have but one thing to embrace, the predictability of our own misery.
Powerfully written, Jo.
-James

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Josie, excellent but very dark. Mysteriousness.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Very good write!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

pwerful, sad state of being...