pummeling of heart (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on July 28, 2003

Jose,
None can ask more than this......

that no matter what
I will walk away proud
complete
at peace
for stepping out in faith
for believing the truth that
the conviction in my soul rings clear

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

just got pummeled myself
your stuff always hits home

Reviewed by Julie Wyatt (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

Life is filled with battles, both mental and physical. When you come away with your heart filled and in peace, you know you've won. Despite what others may think.

Reviewed by Bill Murray

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

Josie, I have always loved your poetry. Do you know why? It is because you have the wonderful ability to comment and make your self understood. Most can't seem to do that when they write. You come straight at your reader without any zigs or zags. This is excellent. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Joseie,
this is excellent.
PJ

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Fantastic work, Josie.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Exceptional writing.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

(((josie)))

this is OUTSTANDING--i agree, one of my faves...it's going into my library

well done

stand up and fight...i'm in your corner

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Excellent poem!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Josie you are a star that will always shine, just make sure you believe it, and you know what those who don't can do! Superb write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

great write, josie! love ya, kid! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

This has become one of my top faves of your poetry now, I loved this, oh my, that last line, just touches so deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

The victory at last, no guts, no glory. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Ah Josie, you took the words out of my mouth (but said them better than I could have!)

Scada

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

What do I think? I loved it.