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Gimme, Gimme, Gimme
by H. Lena Jones → (All Poetry by H. Lena Jones)
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An observation of children who are privileged and those who are not. Question is, which ones are more appreciative?


 


Gimme, Gimme, Gimme


by


h. lena jones


 


Give them a stick and an empty coke can


And they will build themselves a toy


Which they will roll merrily along


A dirt road in their village


Laughing with childish glee


Enjoying untold hours of


Fun and excitement


Grateful to have


A toy to play with


These are the children


Of third world countries


These pull at your heartstrings!


 


On the other side of the world


It’s the gimme now children


Influenced by advertisements


Where manufacturers are out to gouge


All they can from parents who might


Otherwise spend their hard-earned cash


On more important things than


Mass-produced expensive plastic toys


Where excitement and happiness are short-lived


And the hardly used toys left abandoned


And eager eyes keep watching advertisements


Until another gimmick hits the market


And renewed cries of gimme, gimme, gimme


Are once again echoed until appeased


These pull at your purse-strings!


 


Thing is, the children in both worlds


Grow up to be adults!


Which ones are more appreciative?


 


“Train up a child in the way he should go;


and when he is old, he will not depart from it.”


(Proverbs 22:6)


 


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 Reviews of "Gimme, Gimme, Gimme"
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on September 18, 2006
Lena, you hit the proverbial nail on the head with this one! Good job!

This is a very serious problem, indeed. We are now living in an age of lawlessness, where greed and disrespect are the standards!

The ROOT lies inside the parent[s], not the child.
The spoiled [ruined] child is the RESULT of the PARENT[S]' poor judgment & behavior. It is a spirit of SELFism that causes parents to buy off time, or whatever, their OWN need may be.

The parent's responsibility does NOT include handing over their authority, and allowing THE CHILD TO CHOOSE, for themselves, what they THINK is good for them, thereby, feeding the spirit of greed and selfishness.

This is a constant issue that pops up [in my Biblical Christian Counselling].......Thank you, dear Sister, for posting this write, and for posting the Scripture. TRAINING INDICATES RIGOROUS REPITITION, NOT SELLING OUT TO WHINING, DEMANDING, OR IN GENERAL, UNACCEPTABLE AND POOR BEHAVIOR[S]. Parents must take back the reins!

Again, thank you, Lena!
Love&blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Sad! A needed write; thank you, Lena! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Right! Powerful, thought provoking, indeed. We've become a nation that prides itself on spoiling our children, and we are the ruination of them. SPOT ON, Lena!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Splendid poem -- splendid message! In a quest for happiness, we chase the materalistic instead of the spiritual wealth of love and appreciation.

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
POWERFUL!
One of our problems in America today is the all mighty dollar. People who used to be satisfied to simply savor life now feel they need expensive toys for their kids and expensive toys for themselves. It may be $50,000 cars that will cost more $ to keep the gas tank full or it may be a twenty room house for a family of five.
Somebody tell me that makes sense.
Great write, Ghristian Sister.

BYW: I am still working on your book. It has a wonderful innocence about it so far.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2006
It's the same with adults sometimes. Good for you to point us the truth. Victor

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 14, 2006
Another wonderful poem, Lena. You sure know how to tug at my heart strings. I totally enjoyed reading this.
Thank you.
Hugs,
CJ

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2006
Oh my God this is so true and your heart Lena is strong and beautiful precious woman!!!!We all can learn from the manna of the Lord!!

Eternal Love, Dove

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 14, 2006
Comparatively awesome write here Lena, and the answer of course is the former!
We need to scale down our unnecessary offerings to children I believe, to teach them to appreciate, we are breeding a nation of ingrates sadly.
Ty for this today
As I freak out at the thought of organizing Evie's 11th Birthday party lol
Love Ch'erie


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