A universal idea in this poem that is well handled. Yes, some of our dreams are indeed "drenched in fear" while others' lead us to have "reasons to be proud". You don't waste words in this one, everything subtle, understated, to the point. Well done. PS: I would take the "s" off repairs in the second line: you don't need it and it spoils the otherwise tight rhyme-scheme.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
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Rana M
powerful sentiment
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Ron