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Last
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LAST

The last days of summer
picking berries from the hedge
and the morning dew
soaking through our shoes

in the pie we could taste
both warmth and rain
and imagine the fields
- ever-changing views

now grass is cut low
it’s easy to walk free
on the smooth or stubble,
first leaves from the gale

we heard a young man
was lost at sea
saving some friends
who never learned to sail

these nights are almost
frosty, but we keep
the heating off, it’s not
even September !

and we’ve stacked
no wood in the garage
that might become
tomorrow’s cheerful ember

life will seem more normal
when the kids go back
chained to their desks
and struggling to spell

talking very fast
about wanting a Wii
and summer abroad
on holidays from hell

the village will be
silent through the day
apart from playtime voices
riding the autumn breeze

it will be just
the natural world
- exquisite colours,
before the big freeze



Note: Wii is an electronic gaming platform

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 Reviews of "Last"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 26, 2012
As a grand vignette of reality...this is so full of imagery and wonderful in its rhyme scheme.

Reviewed on June 22, 2012
I can smell the autumn air already!! It's my favorite time of year!


Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on April 26, 2012
This is great I am sorry it took me so long to read this, to find this, like I said you have made a fan out of me, well done
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on January 2, 2012
some good descriptions here, Paul. How exciting to live in Yorkshire. I suppose you have visited the Brontes old parsonage. They were a tragic brilliant family. Imagine watching your family die before you like their father did.

Reviewed by Jennifer Perez
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
Beautiful poem loaded with incredible imagery. I delighted in the sensory experiences; feeling, tasting, CARING! Thank you!

And I LOVE your profile photo.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 27, 2011
Paul,
Love this poem, Paul!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed on September 27, 2011
I love everthing about this beautiful slice of life poem

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 26, 2011
This one is a bounty of senses and passion. I see it all, smell the aromas and get goosebumps from the quiet chill.

Susan

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on September 25, 2011
Simply perfect.


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 24, 2011
smooth, colorful and gentle ...

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on September 23, 2011
Perhaps "last" but not least
of the summer season...
~Paul~
is your insightful poem!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on September 23, 2011
I loved enjoying the seasons with you as I read your poem. Just lovely.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on September 23, 2011
I love the interweaving of season and family, Paul. Wonderful piece! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 22, 2011
I am fine with the transitional seasons, autumn and spring -- it is the solitude and unwelcoming outcast arms of winter that bites deeply into mu soul -- stark, appearing lifeless and lasting for what seems an eternity -- the wolves teeth of bitter cold is not the friend of human flesh- trees were surely meant to be green or flowering, not naked and starkly brown and gray -- winter, if I had my way, you'd be held forever at bay -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 22, 2011
This is lovely, Paul; I can so easily imagine myself there through your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 22, 2011
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 21, 2011
A beautiful depiction of life greeting the changing seasons as one settles down for the pending winter to come...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 21, 2011
Absolutely charming, Paul!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on September 21, 2011
Excellent write about the shifting of the seasons. But I especially enjoyed the phrase, "in the pie we could taste both warmth and rain." How insightful --- My senses would have never overtly recognized the combination of warmth and rain. Enjoyed, R

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 21, 2011
Enjoyed this poetic walk through a wonderful season...well done Paul.
fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 21, 2011
Your words took us from season to season Paul in a sad yet beautiful way filled with bright beautiful colours.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 21, 2011
It's the gentleness of your reflective
style that always appeals to me, Paul.

John

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 21, 2011
The last days of summer always sadden me a little, but those exquisite colours before the big freeze are spectacular to behold.


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