Oh, my, Ron... that last line, 'make young the old of me' caused a gasp. It's poetic (no kidding!) and jammed with directions to explore. I very much like the musings of the recurring first lines. They are the heart of the telling... Sigh, a cruise, eh? Who wouldn't be inspired? Horizons in every direction is only possible at sea, and I love the sea. Thanks for bringing me into this... katy xox.
Ron, I think this is the first time I've ever been massaged by a poem! I swear I could feel the sea breeze on my face and the warm sand on my shoulders as I watched your dream from the beach.
Stunning work!
Sorry Ron, you are too old to make young again...but you surely can be quite refreshed as you did for me herein...Ed
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2005
Well I tell you it did relax me for a little while and yes I could feel my feet just a dangling. A very nice poem and I have seabreeze shower soap and that helped.
the motion and meter of this poem seems to correspond with the movement of waves and its sense of being or totality is something well worth dreaming of ...
Potential meets purpose for great accomplishments in the life of a young student.
A young student is interested in learning coding programs. He applies and is rejected because of his age. He does not give up and tries again and is accepted. Eventu
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Stunning work!
Lisa
Can your wheel catch me if I run?
Not good then I am in!!
No turbo boost for your wheels huh?
But I can always catch a lift if you behave!!
Just fooling...enjoyd this little treasure!!
Love Tinks {wink}
very absorbing ...
Eileen
Great read Ron.....it sounds quite divine....
ty, Dani
P.S Next time take me...;) lol
Take care,
Sherry