Loved the second stanza: "spindly are their vehicles... agile and wasplike wing" (sorry if I've not got this right - had to relogin in the meantime!!) Very acute and descriptive - onomatopaeic as well - (spellin's gone too!) Makes my fragile mind spin just to think about it! And the SMELL! You successfully take us there, Ron, and the buzz is fantastic! :)) Kate xx
The Indy 500 is as much an American staple as apple pie, Ron. I think we all dream about what it must be like to drive one of those amazing machines. Excellent poem, I really enjoyed the read. Your images are excellent, I could hear the cars whizzing past me.
Take care,
Sherry
Potential meets purpose for great accomplishments in the life of a young student.
A young student is interested in learning coding programs. He applies and is rejected because of his age. He does not give up and tries again and is accepted. Eventu
He Keeps Me is a devotional journey of revelation and insight birthed out of prayer.Searching the Word of God revealed the many ways that He has kept me and continues to keep me. Each day is an opportunity to recognize that God is mindful of you, eve
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Superb capture in this exciting well written poem!
Eileen
Take care,
Sherry