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Razor Sharp
Dull is last century,
sharp is in.
So sharpen your pencil,
and let us begin.
Throw out those rants,
about your long lost love.
Stop boring our senses,
with endless turtledove.
Get out your Thesarus,
and find some words.
The crap you've been writing,
makes well formed turds.
The sky is blue,
and so is the sea.
So what's new,
about these revelations,
since 1803?
I don't care how long,
he's been hurting you.
You need help to get away,
not our pity to continue.
And for you lotharios,
with one track minds.
The cell phone is more portable,
for texting ass finds.
So if you find me dull,
with my meter and rhyme.
I should say , "Go stick it,"
but instead, "Read my line."
Where the word is a razor,
and cuts a fine mime.
Sometimes the truth bleeds,
at an inconvenient time.
There must be meaning,
in my verse.
All else is just nonsense...
or worse.
Copyright 2008 © Ronald W. Hull
1/12/08
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With your cuts from a mime...e
Where the word is a razor,
and cuts a fine mime.
Sometimes the truth bleeds,
at an inconvenient time.
how stong! Loved it!!!
now i do wonder who you are writing about, perhaps its a composite poet, or maybe even someone not on this site.......
I found this sharp and witty and actually quite compassionate...telling the lamentful poet to move on, mend that heart, dont dwell in agony.......
good advice sir!
paxA
at an inconvenient time.
There must be meaning,
in my verse.
All else is just nonsense...
or worse.
Points well made, Ron. "In your face" and honest testimony. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
ET
Love,
Susan
Good one Ron...