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The Song of Hagar # 3
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Oily substance= black gold


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O Lord it is now that I turn to look

At you abruptly from a glass display

Of my image to stare at you

Withe the serious madness of some thin faced

And starving animal whose souless eyes are rapt

With poetic vision and with hunger.

It is now that I lie in death remembering

Of my peaceful island and it's blue green sea

Where I dreamed the stars kissed the waters

And where the whispering wind paused

In whispering 1000 times

To lift me up and sweep me away

And to sing with me the sweet song

Of childhood.


 

I ask for one tiny sip

Of cool clear water

And from out of the desert's hot lip

Some oily sunstance came bubbling

And your children of light


Who banished me to die- turn and lay claim


To my bitter drink...


 
 
 


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 Reviews of "The Song of Hagar # 3"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 31, 2007
And to sing with me the sweet song
Of childhood

I love these verses and the whole poetic offering is wonderfully engaging and so well presented, Judy. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 26, 2007
Wow! A deep write my friend, one also a bit sad. Very well written, you grab the readers attention from the beginning and keep them captivated through to the finish! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on February 26, 2007
FANTASTIC WORK! And I think the title is VERY appropriate. Wonderful piece. Michelle

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on February 26, 2007
Your view of this poetic spirituality that one is evolved through and into as the escape and return from childhood to death and to childhood once again...a very interesting thought of the drink of life and how it can be a grasp for a small drop of a drink and yet the ones who also seek it's flavor at times are the same who wish to banish us away....

nice work.....Art Sun...

Reviewed on February 26, 2007
Sad...

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Tigran Israelyan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2007
O me Judy, you be the death of me. Please get this off.

Love,
Tigran


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