An innocent, yes
Unsure and naïve
So unaware of the real world
But – not for long.
Released into reality
With no guiding hand,
To freely give unwanted but necessary advice.
Sex, drugs and uncensored speed
Quickly tainted what once was pure.
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Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2007
Brilliant!... simply brilliant, i am sure that many can relate to the essence of your messege, mike
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