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A Pretty Girl
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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“You ARE a pretty girl”.

At twelve years old this was a first

Her mother had never uttered such words

Not to her, the youngest of four

 

But those words just hung in the hot summer air

She’d a saddle in her arms and sweat on her brow

Her long thin hair tied back with a red bandana

And those words just hung there, proof that they were said

 

So, as my little granddaughter, so much like her great aunt

Her thin hair in braids, a saddle in her arms

Looked up from her efforts, a smile on her face

Reminded me of my sister, I choked back my tears

 

I took those hanging words

And I put them to good use

Told my sweet grandchild for the hundredth time, I know

How very lovely and good she truly is
 


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 Reviews of "A Pretty Girl"
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
AWESOME! She needed to hear that! and KNOW it, your love bubbles over Karen!
I'm so proud to call you my friend!
YOur words here are like an Angel, the Angel that YOU are! Giving your love unselfishly as you do! to her/etc.
Her pict. is so adorable! Give her another hug for me, when u can!
Ride em' cowgirl, the obedience and lessons you learn from horses, and patience is wonderful and important!
God great loving creatures!
Amen!
to you, this heartfelt write( I would print, frame and give it to her) It will be important~ Just an idea... :)
STay STrong and Happy!
Blessings to your sister/Etc. God Bless! Amen!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
How beautiful!

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
children are such a joy aren't they? While my sons and I never experienced horses, this poem brought back many many memories of when we camped and fished along the Kankakee River...the joy of watching them learn, laugh and run about like wild savages is as strong today as it was then. Excellent work here, Karen.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
Wonderful poem.....such a realistic write...simple but very very powerful and sweet...cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
This is a sweet little poem.
I love horses as I was always
riding since I was, oh 4-5
I've done cowboying etc. So...
I liked your pic of you on
your horse, that is you right?
Great!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Amazing how simple words make the difference. Nice story. Lady j

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Karen, the picture of your Granddaughter is great and she is worthy of the words you spoke to her. I'll bet she will never forget them. I love your voice in this piece, it relays to the reader the sincerity in every word you penned. A great poem!

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Beautiful you have touched so much in this what a beautiful little girl you and her are so blessed to have each other in life.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Beautifully expressed, Karen. This is a gift of affirmation for "the pretty girl." Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
This truly brings a lump to my throat and tears to my eyes, Karen. Affirmation is EVERYTHING to a little child and your wonderful photograph says it all... What a total little Sweetheart and Darling! I have heard it said that positive words withheld is as much an abuse as harsh words spoken and, from my own experience, I can very much beleive it. Bless you and your heart of love and words for all these deserving little angels - dirty-faced or clean! :)) K xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Children need that, time n time again...Hmmm so do I...

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
beautiful job. warm expression of true love. thanks for sharing this one. luck

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Praise and feelings of love go hand in hand to help build feengs of self esteem.. She is pretty and so lucky to have you......M

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Lovely write and very striking picture of yes a very beautiful young lady.

Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Karen,

Your a lucky grandma and she's a lucky little girl. You are Blessed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
Good for you Karen, we can never hear it enough as children to confirm that we are loved! Great poem and pic!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
And keep on telling her, too, Karen; it is through our praise or our put downs that they develop their self image...call a child stupid or tell them they will never amount to anything and you can be certain it will come to frutation. Praise them and they will learn to soar. A great message in this offering.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
Many times words are hard to come from parents for one reason or another but those that receive them hold them in their hearts.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
Affirmation to a young girl child of the most valued kind, Karen...this is exactly the kind of support at a young, tender age that will award her with high self-esteem as she reaches her teenage years when a female needs it the most to think highly of herself to carry her on into her young womanhood where she is then able to reach for the stars! Great write. Happy Fourth...bandanas and saddles!

Sage

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
love forwarded through-culminated from all who knew you{beautiful} <>Ted


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