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To Visit Her Mother
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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She is so excited, (she is almost six)


To see her mother in re-hab


Hasn’t seen her for months


 


The visit isn’t the same for me


The amount of dread in the pit of me


Is only overcome by my will to do what is right by her child


 


As we leave, her mother says, “Thanks.”


I want to tell her, “I blame you for so much.”


But, because of my granddaughters smiling face and skipping feet


I don’t


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 Reviews of "To Visit Her Mother"
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Glad you got this out Karen!
I hug you that you didn't, you are right she does not NEED to be reminded of the sad situation HER mom put you's in!
I send you my strength, when you feel you are lacking it!
I send many warm hugs to little one, for feeling in her heart, a love still so strong!
This sets a powerful life meaning for many!
Take Care of your own, their OUR repercussions! Sometimes! WE are the ones who really benefit! :)
God Bless!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive! WE make our own memories to remember! MOre Power to YOU my friend ~ and to her! ((Child Angel))

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Wow, this poem bites. The sting of the words have just great meanings you did a great job here.

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Powerful stuff! Poignant poem about a difficult subject. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
This speaks volumes...emotions scarred upon compassion and grace...well done

Allen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
Karen, this speaks in a voice of nagging hurt and pain...so much to say but must bite the tongue, can't allow the grandchild to hear or see anymore hurt. This poem touches the heart of this grandmother and I can understand totally how it hurts you. God Bless.

Reviewed on October 23, 2007
(((prayers and hugs)))

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
hmmm so much pain has been endured,, not easy,, You are the bigger person to put aside emotions for your grandchild,,,May every thing all work out,, God Bless Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
The last verse speaks volumes Karen, and I'm so glad you are there for your grandaughter. Bless you!

Love,
ET

Reviewed on October 22, 2007
((((Karen))))

This is sad...happens all too often. You are doing the right thing in allowing the child to see her mother, and raising her the best way you know how. (((prayers)))

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
Karen,
I grew up being raised by my grandparents for the most part..I till this day really don't communicate with my mother. I have always felt that my Nana (grandmother) was my real mother, she gave me love, and nurtured me. And you know, that is where bonding comes in..Your grand daughter will never really be close to her mother, the bonding of these early years will dictate that..Do not fear, you are doing the right thing, and your grand daughter will benefit one hundred times more for this..You are an amazing woman.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
Quite powerful, Karen, and quite loving for your granddaughter's sake.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
A lot is stated in this poem as Felix says being a parent and grandparent we do understand the feelings very well. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
As a parent and a grandparent I am so with your feelings on this one. You captured the anger and frustration we feel when children go above and beyond the respect of love stage and we can no longer act like they are not to blame for things they have done.

Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
Human counter revealing insecurity of accumulation -love Ted

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
As torn-apart-piece as I've ever read, or written, Karen. And I sigh, as I see the road ahead of me/her, again. More tired, older and more compassioned to remain 'human'. And when it costs, it costs deep.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Short but says alot in this poem. Expressive and sad.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Sad state of affairs.


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