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She Didn't Have a Phone
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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She Didn't Have a Phone


 


She pushed herself up onto the old, worn barstool


And she lifted her twelve-string up onto her lap


Cradling it with ease and comfort in her arms


Holding the instrument like the good friend it was


 


Her long brown hair cascaded over her shoulders


Resting along the curves of her guitar


Salvation Army beads and war surplus jeans


Adorned her in a time long past


 


The man behind the counter nodded his head, "Ready."


Her left hand raised and her fingers formed a "C" chord


Her right hand shook with nerves


But her fingers deftly picked the strings


 


Peter, Paul and Mary's folky version
Of John Denver's, "Leavin' on a Jet Plane"


Came softly flowing forth from her (she didn't miss a word)


Accompanied by the notes of her instrument (she didn't miss a chord change)


 


Now the owner of that old Nashville club


Read well between the lines


This girl, so naïve, did not need this job


So he thanked her kindly and said he would call


 


She didn't have a phone


 


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 Reviews of "She Didn't Have a Phone"
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
How beautiful, you are one talented lady. Love this one. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Sometimes - it is in the doing of something [rather than 'getting the call'] that is most important. Knowing that you 'did' it is what matters - I speak from experience on a few things that have transpired in my life.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Poignant, Karen, and totally melting. I can feel and picture this so well. To be without a phone in this day and age is "deprivation" indeed. You last line is a clincher. TY Kate xx

Reviewed on February 11, 2008
my wife has one but she never keeps it charged, and she can sing, but she won't, interesting poetic story Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Karen thank you for haring with us as I have to admit, I could hear myself sing as I too were strumming the old guitar. Delightful. Wish she had a phone because I too think she missed her call.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Karen, I was right there in that bar as I read this...what fabulous images you've portrayed in this writing...made my imaginations run wild. You've captured a picture of true life in the Nashville area...those trying to make it to the big time. I'm glad she no longer needed a phone.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Enjoyable...For some reason the Blues Brothers Came to mind....

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
life is such irony at times, and yet it plays exactly as it is meant to...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Excellent writing sweet lady,stay safe and well...HUgsss

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
One wonders if the owner knew she didn't have a phone and offered to call to pacify something in himself and her, or possibly he really wanted her, and she missed her opportunity because she was unprepared. Either was I think that I would have called back the following day to make sure. Thankyou for this delightfully palpable write.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Karen, I felt as though I was there watching the story unfold. You told it well...so many times in life, the things that we do best, are the things we do because we love them...not because they have a price attached!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
poignant, powerful, and vivid character sketch Karen!
Very excellent poem!

Luv
ET

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Karen, there is so much more isn't there?
Beautiful and cynister - c'est la vie!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Tom Kitt
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Nicely done

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Fan...tastic write and a great ballad. I could feel that guitar as if I were holding it myself and I was just ready to change to a "G" chord as my mind starting singing along...sometimes it is not a contract that's important...just being heard is enough..

Fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
wonderful visions,, reminds me of a scene out of a movie.. well done.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Wow, I hope you have more to tell us. I love what you've done thus far. Very dark.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Excellent, Karen, you took me there. Just played for the fun of it!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
...and I love this story told...still traveling.
wonderfully written...
John

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
A twelve string & no phone _ What a flashback _ (wonderful)~olloevev_Ted

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Haha!! You DO haver a thing about John Denver, huh, Karen . . . Loved this slice of life poem . . . Those who fail outnumber those who excel . . . Lesson's learned . . . Hello ANYONE! READING THIS . . . Buy Karen's Memoir book "Show and Tell." She has the link above . . . It is WELL WORTH READING . . . Get it!!!!!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Such is life when we have what it takes but don't come prepared.


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