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Truth Makes a Better Man
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Truth Makes A Better Man

In spite of the feel good sound o
f, "Do whatever feels Good",
And, "Whatever makes you happy, just go with the flow",
There is, I believe, a right and wrong, a black and white,
And a whole lot less gray area for folks to flounder in.

Amidst the myriad of 'politically correct' and all the 'feel good' clichés,
The truth is there, it has just been muddied,
By double talk and too many kudos given,
Pats on the back and lies are told,
When the truth would make a better man.


 

 


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Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on March 29, 2008
Yes, truth is usually discernible, but the grey-area people can't be discounted; we've all been there wondering who the heck to believe.
Don't follow leaders unless you feel love, compassion and good sense emanating from them. Think of George Orwell's 1984, 2+2 were 5 there, and no one except winston gave it a thought.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 17, 2008
BINGO! Bullseye and brilliant. Succinct and right between the eyes. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on March 17, 2008
You are so 'right on!' Enough of this jibberish - speak the truth. It may be complicated, but then there is no mistaking what is being said. I hate 'double talk.'

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 17, 2008
oh so true.......very wise write Karen!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Yes Indeed!!! great words Karen
Christine

Reviewed on March 16, 2008
great poem to ponder Karen, I believe in truth and common sense. But perjury is getting on the witness stand lying when there is a chance of getting caught. You can say whatever you want as long as you don't get caught or it is proved that you committed perjury. A fool tells a lie knowing the truth will be found out. A wise man doesn't lie at all, or at least keeps his mouth shut. President Clinton lied knowing his secret might be revealed, I would have told the truth and asked for forgiveness like the govenor of New York did. Perjury is lying on the witness stand though. Anyway, truth only lies in the cousicious of better people. There's an outer truth and an inner truth, the outer truth stands strong but the inner truth wavers inside selfish minds. hugs my dear poetess.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
An excellent piece Karen
Peave & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Amen!!!!!! Couldn't agree more.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
i agree...nice truth Karen

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Bravo this poem speaks wisdom i agreed with you!
Honesty is always the best policy
Excellent write and a powerful message!!
Peace Love and Joy....Morning Star

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Like you, I usually see most things in black and white, in right and wrong, and it usually makes my life much easier and enables me to quickly make decisions. But I think many like to see things in many shades of grey, which makes the 'fudge factor' much easier.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
I am 100% with you, I have always told my children it is the lies that upsets one, it is best to be honest and deal with it so life can go on.One lie always needs another and another etc. to cover it up and sooner or later you forget what you've said because it was a lie. Thank you Karen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Lying is kinda like embezzlement, "No one has ever thought about doing it the way I will do it."
Lying is so prevelent these days, It's a shame that any of us try it.
It begins at home, spreads to thethe workplace or school, and it's downhill from there on...........
This is an excellent offering Thank you. - Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Bravo! Prose that speaks wisdom in every line!
Thank you Karen!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Ooh, a good one! Cuts to the bone, too. Cheers

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
I have always believed that honesty is the best policy
Wise and sagacious words to muse upon indeed

Peter

Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Your wisdom here is not only in what you say but that you say it. Well done. Good write!

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
I must agree with you 100% on this for often words are spoken just to fill the vacant space when it is uncomfortable to say what you really want to say...but is it really a good idea to do that?


Fee

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
So true my friend, people are just so in denial...

Reviewed by Tom Kitt
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
The truth is not a relative concept. It is not a guess. It is an inclusive and irrefutable fact that throughout the history of human knowledge has never been assimiliated. We wayward it with fairy tales or spout the tenet All is One without the foggiest notion of how all being one actually works. We do not understand that the truth is blocked from us at every turn by a force of nature we ourselves create. We must come to terms with this force before we can gain the truth.
Regards, Tom

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
The truth is on everyones heart. Yet how many of us see it...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Well said!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Jack Nicholson was right "We can't handle truth!" You are right about what makes a better man...but how do you change mans nature?

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Karen,
This poem send out a powerful message. A truth being told. A touching piece of poetry.

Reviewed on March 13, 2008
You got it, the truth is always the way.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Just look at the statistics and it proves your point. Abortion, STD's VD and the list goes on.

Reviewed on March 13, 2008
You're right, Karen, excellent write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Well said, Karen. You made a valid point well worth adhering to.

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
I must say I can't argue with you a bit. That's the criteria!

PS: saw by your Bio, you grew up in W. Newbury, VT - been there many times - when I visit my sister in Ryegate, VT - I usually get my fishing license in the Newbury general store! Nice place on a summer day anyway - best to your writing, Michael

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Very well said Karen, great and truthful write. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Ab-so-lutely!! I just told a truth as I see it today on my Myspace site . . . I like the person very much, but sometimes . . .

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Crystal() to be or ~ hollow egg shells _ bless you * evollove _ TedSo


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