Round and Round (poem) by Karen C Vanderlaan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

I never really thought about it until your write but it is round and round and never stops. A great write, thank you for sharing Karen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Debra Kraft

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

something to talk about, and yet seemingly so little time for talking. Sometimes the turning just moves too fast, a roller-coaster merry-go-round...

Well said.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Round and Round, we all truly do go.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

So very real!!!!!!!! NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

...great write Karen...this go round of words...which at Christmas finds Merry...and then a new go round...starts again. ...and what about gallop poles...they seem to go in circles also.
you got me going here Karen...
very well done...
John

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Boomerang Karen, and boomerang again, great piece of verse, :-)

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Karen, the cycles of life that we travel are over & over as though they're repeated in the same manner each year. I'm glad though that I have been blessed to repeat the cycles and to be with my wonderful husband and feel the love of my dear children, grand-children and great grand-children...those cycle is what we call "life," and I'm looking for eternal life in the hereafter. A great job on this one!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

The circle of life no doubt,,,

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

That's about it Karen, cycles and circles seasons and reasons,until one day HEAVEN,and all was worthwhile!;-)ET

Reviewed by J.A. Aarntzen (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

We are all in the cycle, the trick is managing to stick your head above it and have a look around. I think that you have discovered that trick!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

So very real. Life is like one big track that we continue to race around from birth till death. Some have a little more scenary that others though.

Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

It all seems so predictable, doesn't it. Actually, life is best when it is predicable because there are less mishaps. Our daily activities and adventures are at the center of our orbital "round and round".

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Getting dizzy with the round and round here . . . LOL . . . That's it though . . . Trying to get through the day so we can wake up and start it all over again . . .

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Yes, round and round...tis poetic ;)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

This is so strange...I was talking about this earlier today...only not as poetically as you have done here. Excellent, Karen.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

You opened a new door for thought. Life is like going a round and round. We make little changes along the way, sometime we get the brass ring, others we don't. Great write Karen, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

And be sure to grab the brass ring as you go round and round.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Beautifully expressed how life is
A merry go round
Love it all those wonderful holiday
except Xmas adds to the monthly
bills to get paid, month after month
Never ending battle
outstanding write love
This poetic view of thoughts!!
Peace Love and light....and hugesss too...Morning star