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But I Tried
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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“But I Tried”

 

We use the word “Try”

Like we think credit is deserved for nothing.

The words, “But I tried”, so commonly used,

To let ourselves of the hook,

For never quite getting things done.

 

Just think, I challenge you, of every time,

You have used or heard these words,

For when they are stated, you can be sure,

That whatever the task, it didn’t get done.

 

In preference we could persevere,

Working hard ‘til the undertaking is complete,

For when we are finished, our souls fill with pride,

Or at the very least, we will feel,

A sense of competence, accomplishment, and pride.

 


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 Reviews of "But I Tried"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
In reading this, I am reminded of the Nike saying...Just do it...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
There is a lot of truth in what you wrote. Many of us say we've tried , but have we really put every thing we have into it!......M

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
A very good thought Karen...the efforts of one should be to accomplish the very task of effort..nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed on November 10, 2008
good one Karen, I'm the worlds biggest procrastinaor, but I try not to be, the only thing I don't put off is having fun, :-)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 9, 2008
I agree with you to a degree, all too often the phrase is used as an excuse but on the flip side people also try do things that are beyond their capabilities and fail through no fault of their own and we must applaud them for doing the very best they can.

fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 9, 2008
It is so strange to read this now, because a friend and I were discussing something along these lines during our lunch break. So well said, Karen!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 8, 2008
I know you are right Karen so easy to use these words when we would have more joy from a job completed. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 8, 2008
Yes Karen. I believe you are right. Thank you for sharing your philosophy. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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