Days Passed By (poem) by Karen C Vanderlaan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 26, 2009

Excellent work Karen...an emotional view of life and how it can pass us by even when we dream...each moment is a precious gift that we should cherish...

truly nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on March 25, 2009

Excellent poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2009

Hi Karen,

Letting go is always difficult, isn't it? I still say let's make hay while the sun's still shinin'!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on March 24, 2009

Youth and all the hopes which go along with it are such a terrible loss. Sad. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

Such beautiful sad yearnings
Of Precious moments that can never
Be recaptured
Beautifully expressed
A brilliant write writing from the heart!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light�Yolie

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

Moments in time are lost forever and never can be recaptured. Great poem!....M

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

I enjoyed it immensley, but a shadow was cast...I know this!
Great write Kaz
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

This is so achingly beautiful as it says so much with so few words. It is sad that all too often whether it is through any fault of our own or not we have a tenedency to look back with regret. Hopefully the future holds a promise of things better...
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

This is unique Karen, penned beautifully; life marches on.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

Precious moments pass all too soon.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

Your lovely poem makes me think of fashions and how they change. In my aging years I've seen some drastic changes and sometimes I've seen a return of things that were fashionable many years back.

Your poem shows how visual "things" can spark our memories to cause us to return to a past time.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

Sad as the writing is, there is a flicker of hope there. Because if the body can't wear those clothes without the ridicule it will attract...the soul will wear it forever, no matter how many years go by, the image on her head will be there, flirting with the world and remembering the words in awe of that tenderhearted boy.

Georg

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on March 22, 2009

Hi Karen,

Sad, so sad. Days that have passed by are times beyond our grasp, and it hurts to remember. A very well written poem!

Cynthia

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 22, 2009

how utterly poignant,and beautifully told! We all can relate and I love your clothing description so lovely...Wonderful poem!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on March 22, 2009

Karen, sometimes...most times...you write from your soul...and your words touch me so deeply. You've once again moved me to tears.

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on March 22, 2009

Memories Of "Days Passed By"
enjoyed the read and yet sensed
a bit of sorrow.

~Gwendolyn