Dream Bars (poem) by Karen C Vanderlaan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

well said

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

What a loving thing to do.
hug
kat

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

A nice sharing of old time traditions . Nothing tastes as good as home made goodies. Dream Bars , touches ones heart with its simplicity and reverance...M

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 12, 2010

God bless you Karen as you work through the pain and emptiness of your sisters loss. How i can relate to the sentiment and spirit of this. Holiday blessings ... r

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on December 12, 2010

Karen, Very sweet of you to make those special dream bars. Her husband will feel peace as he places them on the grave. Touching! Your friend, ~Chessly

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

nice work Karen...

sad but a nice thoughtfull poem...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 9, 2010

A deeply touching Christmas poem! Beautifully written with the love you hold dear in your heart,that will connect in spirit through the dream bars!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 7, 2010

Stunning, both figuratively and literally. Those Dream Bars will be especially love-laced this year, Karen. Extremely moving. Bless you, xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on December 7, 2010

Oh my word. Such artistry in how to end a poem with such impact.

There is a delicacy to this poem that is most moving, indeed.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on December 7, 2010

This piece is so powerful...the moment I finished reading it I knew and pictured the warm memory.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on December 6, 2010

Karen,
You poem just touched my heart. Yes she is missed every so dearly. This is a beautiful way to remember her.
God Bless, my sweet friend.
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 6, 2010

Karen, this is touching and beautiful~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 6, 2010

Such a wonderful beginning, and such a sad ending.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on December 6, 2010

I WAS READING AND THINKING OF YOUR BEAUTIFUL SISTER, NOW I KNOW YOUR PAIN........'I will send some to her husband this year, and he will place them on her grave'------ THIS WORDS ARE FROM MY HEART!!!!!!!!!! May GOD BLESS YOU and bring HAPPINESS in YOUR HEART!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 6, 2010

Such special fond memmories linger in our hearts forever. I hope you pack and extra batch for her husband though as he probably misses her and could also use the warm fuzzies of eating a cookie baked by a friend...great write Karen
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Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on December 6, 2010

Very touching! How a recipe can bring the past flooding back.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on December 5, 2010

The twist at the end is powerful and beautiful.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 5, 2010

There is much to think about as I read and reread your verses, Karen. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 5, 2010

Different