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Our Love Is Real
by Barbara Kasey Smith → (All Poetry by Barbara Kasey Smith)
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Long ago we took our vows...

Long ago we took our vows,
promising to live our lives together until the end,
not knowing the obstacles and hardships we'd face,
our love...pure, respectful, and no reason to pretend.

We struggled through many years of uncertainties,
unable to see the end of the tunnel for many years,
hoping we could make ends meet to keep a meal on the table,
many times...I hid my agony and a fear you'd see my tears.

You knew my concerns and my anxieties...never telling me,
you'd kiss my brow and pat my cheeks, whispering your love,
a cheeriness would glow on my face and a twinkle in my eye,
I felt secure, knowing you worked hard to keep us fed and snug.

Years ran away like clouds drifting through a weathering sky,
we'd lay hours loving each other like it would be the last time,
never a feeling of monotony...passions and desires lit up our spirits,
releasing and satisfying every fiber until the ending of the sublime.

I've been your woman, our children's Mother, your lover, your friend,
we made a commitment to live our lives together until the end,
you've been my man, head of household, a father, my lover, my pal,
you've given all of yourself...I'm a woman who hit a gigantic win.

We're both older and feeling our aches and pains,
we still love each other, playing our teasing games,
as I look into your blue eyes...I feel a fervor and so alive,
knowing our passions, desires, and love is still not tamed.

Our love is real...

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Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
Hi Barbara! What a wonderful dedication of love this poem is? I love the beautiful sentiment!!!!!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on November 30, 2007
Fantastic.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
And this kind of love can never be tamed, Barbara, because it is its own fuel and fire. Reminds me of Song of Songs, about "love being as unyielding as the grave" and "many waters cannot quench love". You paint a very real picture here, and it's beauty and honesty shine. TY for sharing such treasure to enrich our hearts. Love, Kate xx

Reviewed by Joseph Breunig 3rd
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
A marveleous and sentimental piece; you are blessed to have found your soulmate; wonderfully written! --Joe

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
What a blessing this write is dear Barbara. Your heart is filled with thankfulness and appreciation. For better or for worse, in sickness and in health, till death do us part. You have set another jewel in the blessed crown of marriage between a man and a woman with this heartful write. I salute you!
Blessings and Love ...
Richard

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Beautiful sentimants written from the heart a
it's not easy to find true love such as this
Congratulations to both of you!!
Love Peace and many more years of happiness...Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
What a wonderful sentiment to share. To be so fortunate to have found that one true love and remained the same for all these years is just heavenly. Be joyous and forever celebrate....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
This is so wonderful!!!! Hope you have many more years of such a special love...most of us can only be happy for you. Great write, expressing a life-long affection and devotion. With all hopes of many more years of such exceptional joy for you and yours,
Jim

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Barbara congratulations for a love so pure and true, so very few can relate to this kind of commitment in todays world, Thank you for sharing what few of us feel is sacret.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Barbara,
I am so happy for you, Yes it is difficult to find a love such as this.
I am still seeking, hoping to feel "real love".
Peace, Love, and Light,

Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Real Love is really Good, as is your poem, Barbara.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
Yes love will do that
excellent & lovely Barbara
Peace & love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
True love is exactly as you've written, and will always win when each is committed to the relationship. I'm glad your spans so many years. I hope you have many,many years together.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
Years ran away like clouds drifting through a weathering sky.
How well put Barbara, we drift in love, with many emotions and experiences through the years, it truly is amazing to think about it all,, after reading your poem it does make me ponder.
Great write,,,, Always, Christine

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
Your devotion and love for each other is felt within each line read...a most enjoyable and thoughtfull poem of love and marriage...nice work, Barbara...

enjoyed...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
This is a thrilling poem, the story of a true and lasting love. How wonderful that you have been committed to each other through the good times and the bad.
I love the way you've listed the roles of each; Your woman, your lover, your friend, etc. A well-rounded marriage lends itself to a well-rounded life.

Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
Amazing tribute to love, dedicated still through years and years.Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
such a beautiful tribute to the love and life the two of youo have shared

Reviewed by Kathryn Thacker
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
It is a beautiful poem and reminds us that marriage should be forever. So many people forget this these days. It really depicts the things that you go through. was a lovely read. thanks =)

kat x x x

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
Wonderful write my friend, full of truth, passion, romance, honesty, and life...enjoyed!
Blessings & Happy Holidays,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
Truth of love & beauty so crystallized here...lovingly Ted

Reviewed on November 24, 2007
This is so wonderful. This is real love that is for sure--we made a commitment to live our lives together until the end.


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