A life they thought would be great on the outside...
May each and everyone of you have a blessed New Year and may all your dreams come into realities!
I saw a Shepherd in the fields tending his sheep,
no time to wander off, no time to rest and sleep.
He must tend his flock to keep them from going astray,
being ever mindful as wickedness draws them far away.
He takes his staff and plods through the fields,
searching for those who have lost their will.
They're innocent and unripe to the world of sin,
he must go on hunting to bring them back in.
No one lends a hand, no one observes,
he must get the lost and teach them God's word.
They're sheep who've gone astray,
meandering off course, eating dirty hay.
Stars shine, emitting light upon the earth,
allowing him to pursue and scan its girth.
Tired and somnolent from his tiring trip...
he won't give up...got to get the lost in his grip.
Others in the herd...try to abandon his care,
yearns to taste the lush, luring them to enjoy the dare.
The flock grows edgy in the darkness of the night,
the Shepherd looks to God to ease his fright.
He asks God to lend him a helping hand,
silent the sheep, drive the lost back into his band.
The sky lit up like the mornings sun...
as missing sheep came hurriedly in a run.
The lost sheep found their way to their Master,
content to be in the hands of their caretaker.
A life they thought would be great on the outside,
brought them transgressions and a life without pride.
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Reviews of "A Shepherd's Watchful Night"
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
I like your idea about a Shepherd-gives me an idea too-Loved the poem
Hi Barbara, I'm just stopping in for today. Things have been rather busy with me and I don't have much time lately for AD. I hope that will change.
I enjoyed your poem that thoughtfully gives the reader something to think about as they start the New Year. Wandering away from the flock can have its detriment on the best of us. The last two lines offer words of wisdom to inspire in-depth thinking.
Well done, Babarba. I haven't forgotten you, and will stop by occasionally. Blessings, my friend.
This poem is such a treasure Barbara, to my eyes and my hearts soul!
I wish you unending happiness, LOVE, and Blessings this NEW YEAR we have been truly blessed with! :)
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo'
STay Positive!
I will try and be here more 2008! I feel such inspiration through your words that he provides are spirit! and heart!
May inner peace be with you always!
Barbara,
Don't we all long for something we don't have, and then we get it, and we are not really sure why we wanted it in the first place. Well life's lessons, great poem, great story..
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Barbara I love the title of this poem
The poem is well written. Your message was very
Moving and inspiring and you captured such beautiful imagery
Your message is very clearly conveyed!!
Brilliant Write!!
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....for The New Year ....Morning Star
Like the way you worded this...while I am not a Christian, I think you captured the essence of your own beliefs with gentle care.
May you experience all the wonders that life can offer,
Jim
I enjoyed your poem that thoughtfully gives the reader something to think about as they start the New Year. Wandering away from the flock can have its detriment on the best of us. The last two lines offer words of wisdom to inspire in-depth thinking.
Well done, Babarba. I haven't forgotten you, and will stop by occasionally. Blessings, my friend.
I wish you unending happiness, LOVE, and Blessings this NEW YEAR we have been truly blessed with! :)
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo'
STay Positive!
I will try and be here more 2008! I feel such inspiration through your words that he provides are spirit! and heart!
May inner peace be with you always!
Wish you & Your Family A Happy New Year
May peace & love be with you forever
William
Happy New Year.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Don't we all long for something we don't have, and then we get it, and we are not really sure why we wanted it in the first place. Well life's lessons, great poem, great story..
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Love, Christine
The poem is well written. Your message was very
Moving and inspiring and you captured such beautiful imagery
Your message is very clearly conveyed!!
Brilliant Write!!
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....for The New Year ....Morning Star
Happy New Year,
Eileen
Be safe,
Karen
May you experience all the wonders that life can offer,
Jim
Blessings,
Joyce B.