He strokes my face with the back of his hand,
the sensations I have...I cannot understand.
He looks into my eyes in a hot-blooded way,
gives me a reason to jerk and pull away.
He whispers a word, it's foreign to me,
who does he think I am...it makes me want to flee?
I've watched you for years, soaking you up in my soul,
I must have you to make my life complete and whole.
Fear not, my love, I'll not hurt or cause you harm,
your fleshy lips and flirty eyes have me under your charm.
You're my soul mate, I've searched for throughout my life,
someday...I will make you my loving companion and wife.
Brush away my hand, it'll do you "no" good,
you belong to me as I know that you should.
Fear not, my love, I'll not hurt or cause you harm,
give me moments of your time...then take my arm.
You're a princess, who has captured my heart,
it took me years to get courage to make my remarks.
You may ask me why I'm confessing my love today,
I know our time is winding down and slipping away.
Will you give me a chance to show you I care,
I promise you my love, I'll forever be true and will share.
It took me years to get the courage to make my remarks,
allow me to get acquainted and you'll see my real heart.
Barb- This is so sweetly put and felt!
Will You....
Always follow your heart! Time is Short! :)
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace! Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
This is beautiful Barbara, Will you give me a chance to show you I care, I promise my love, I'll forever be true and will care. Great words. thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
I admire your writing Barbara, very nicley done! love Holly
I will admit dear Barbara that your writing skills have improved so in the last year. Beautiful open and poignant emotion here. Now, who is this person?
Blessings ...
Wow very interesting thoughts
Sounds like the beginning of an
Awesome friendship, Can't wait
For part two?
Brilliant as always sweet lady!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star
Very well done Barbara. Sounds like the start of something wonderful. You left me hanging here tho. You're going to have to do a follow up to this one my friend. Quickly too; I hate cliff hangers. God bless.
You can't just leave us hanging here in suspense, do tell what happens next? I am doing Midsummer Night's Dream right now, and this poem feels like a scene from that play. Amazing writing!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
A time of self reconciliation? Time is fleeting, ours "is winding down and slipping away". A suspenseful, interesting poem. Thanks for sharing it with me. May peace be always with you. JMW
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Will You....
Always follow your heart! Time is Short! :)
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace! Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive! and STay STrong!
Thoroughly enjoyed Barbara, continued blessings to you,
~Gwendolyn
You always create the most wonderful poetry
Of which I enjoy reading with pleasure
Love & peace be with you
William
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Blessings ...
Allen
Great poem...
Christine
Sounds like the beginning of an
Awesome friendship, Can't wait
For part two?
Brilliant as always sweet lady!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"