Let me love you
as we travel through beds of roses
cross oceans to different shores
walk cactus filled arid regions
trapped in raging storms
attaining the apex in our lives.
Let me love you
feel the tenderness of your skin
warmth of your breath against my neck
tears upon my back
hearing the woe's of the days journey
expressing your love in a fervent plea.
Let me love you
as the seeds of our union lie fertile in the womb
watch as you give life to our newborn
share our love as we select a name
laugh as we decide he looks like me
sleep restless after we bring him home.
Let me love you
for who you are and what you mean to me
allow our spirits to bond to each other for life
stroke you throughout the night
telling you "I love you" beyond belief
as your head is cradled against my chest.
Barbara, you brought tears to my eyes for in being married now over 56 years I understand and feel the depth of your words, "...allow our spirits to bond to each other for life."
So very beautiful!
Richard
Reviewed by Susie McCray (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
Wow. This is a great poem. I hope I will be able to find love like this.
This is beautiful, I have a young lady in my life now who inspires me to write about her and our love, I hope to post it soon, and thank you for taking the time to read my work. Best wishes. HLF.
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
Most beautiful Barbara, love Holly
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
Oh my,what a beauty you have written here sweet lady..well done indeed...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugs
Barbara, a stunning love poem written with such depth of passion! it is so beautifully and honestly expressed, a keeper to treasure!Thank you for sharing !...ET
Oh my goodness... Barbara, this reduces me to tears. So eloquent and rich, yet couched in a straightforward and vulnerable tenderness. The depth is stunning.... love the "tears upon my back" especially. Bless you, Kate xx
Woooow this one is truly longevity love!
Your words capture beautiful visuals
My favor.....seeds of our union lie fertile in the womb
watch as you give life to our newborn
I love it!!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star
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The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
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In so, so many ways.
I love it.
Tony
Wonderful write
Thank you for this share
Richard
An outstanding piece, how could Ihave ever
missed this masterpiece
Love & Peace be with you
William
Totally romantic and blooms with endless love~I love it.
Quite a golden penning, continued blessings Barbara.
All the best always,
~Gwendolyn
Barbara, you brought tears to my eyes for in being married now over 56 years I understand and feel the depth of your words, "...allow our spirits to bond to each other for life."
So very beautiful!
Richard
Newfie Hugs, Rose
thanks
Tuchy
Edwin
ann
Your words capture beautiful visuals
My favor.....seeds of our union lie fertile in the womb
watch as you give life to our newborn
I love it!!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star