I think Ray J better go sit it down with his "Sexy Can I" single cause yours is hittin a whole lot better. I really like your whole wade in the water theme going on here that is fire. I was waiting for you to baptist whoever you were talking to with a kiss or something at the end of this joint. But nevertheless, the whole piece was excellent and if I were the fortunate soul for whom these words of love were targeted. I'd be like Obama and tell you "Yes You Can!" Anyways I really liked it and keep up the skillz sista. Peace!
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)