I will return to you as the rain,
I will weep with you, feeling your pain.
I will return to you as the wind,
I will embrace you , comfort you,
And you won’t even know it was me….
MY...MY, THIS WORK DESCRIBES THE WORLD'S 'ONLY HOPE'...EXACTLY. I LOVE IT AND I APPRECIATE YOU SHARING YOUR GIFT...SO BEAUTIFULLY. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
From my own point of view, this poem is your soul-self speaking to you, rather than just another human... who is always living within self-imposed limitations and strictures of belief systems.
Lovingly written . . . excellent!
Take care,
Lance
Such beautiful passion!
One could also say you where referring to God!
Peace Love and hugsssss....Morning Star
is within your words
Love & peace
William
Sensual and mystical writing.
Greetings,
Axilea
Regis
judith
Peace.
Homeschool
Romantic-philosophic libidinal aroma abounds in "Poem". Inspiring imagery stimulator with colorful rainbow of wonders.
I congratulate Master Anatol Kardiukov for the PAR EXCELENCE translation of the works of Author-Poet Liana Margiva.
In gratitude,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
~~martin~~
Ron
Susan