Stop The Time (poem) by Liana Margiva on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on February 17, 2010

UNFORTUNATELY, LIANA....TIME AND TIDE WAITS FOR NO MAN...WE JUST HAVE TO 'ROLL' ALONG WITH IT. GOOD WRITE AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on November 24, 2009

Profound and deeply moving Liana! What a beautiful gift you have your poems have gret meaning, which I appreciate very much! May the Lord bless you and grant to you your heart's desires! Be encouraged Liana and keep on writing and sharing!

Much Love,
Always!!

P.S. Precious Gem you are!

Reviewed by Mary Jones

Reviewed on November 10, 2009

such a heartfelt poem, Liana. i enjoyed its flow, it sentiments, its plea all reached out to touch me.
love and hugs
mary etta

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

Stopping time...a concept I'm sure we've all wanted at one point or another. Soul's cravings. Thought-provoking! Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Liana,

Your poems say so much - each and every one that I've had the good fortune to read . . . you are very talented!!

Best to you,

Lance

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

When I was 9 years old, now 63, I wanted time to stop and to stay at 9 always. It comes back to me now, and ever since death of husband on 8/17/07 it is more felt than usual. I guess God wanted me to live a longer life and experience 2 marriages and children and all and he has a plan still for my welfare. I trust in him but like this poem and it tells it like it is. Everything oh so true in life today.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

I can relate to these sentiments, Liana. Sometimes when I close my eyes it seems I can feel time fly past my face like a breeze. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

The hope that can be felt in your poem is beautiful and fragile against relentless time. But... how can the train of your own existence leave without you? ;) So many different perceptions of life we can have in a lifetime!

Axilea

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

A heart felt plea. I sometimes wish time could be stopped. Its going by way too fast ! Its hard to go back . Nothing stays the same! Well done .......M

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

...it is remembered moments...of things done...and yet unfinished...of wish we wish to stop the time.
you have spoken also of our unspoken wish...
beautiful...
John

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

If Only time could be stopped
Dreams would be fulfilled
and my eyes would shed no more tears
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on December 1, 2007

moving request to stop the time
I agreed with Unda
This beautiful words of wisdom must
Have been written by a spirit!!
Absolutely Beautiful!!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

yes, i agree-please stop the time-it goes too fast for this old gal!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 18, 2007

A gentle moan from a hurting and trembling soul caught by the teeth of time that shreds our weak dreams.
Then again...always is another train coming next.
Painfully penned.
Georg

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 16, 2007

this poem is a very moving plea for life to recapture its validity before it's too late ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 15, 2007

You bring to light all that encompasses being human, always in search of and never reaching, enjoyed....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on October 15, 2007

These words were written by a spirit who understood the concept no soul has ever put to words. Mr. Kardiukov's versatile perception allowed him to write from a scope that is an asset to the reputed Russian literal tradition and a gift to those who embrace immaculate beauty. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed being on this page.

U