The Soul (poem) by Liana Margiva on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

WHAT A MARVELOUS PAINTING! THE 'THIRSTY' DARK SOUL...PINING FOR THE 'WATERS' THAT WILL QUENCH...FOREVER. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on November 12, 2009

Excellent poem Liana! I found it most interesting!

Much Love,
Always!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on December 30, 2008

Such deep anguish illuminated, the yearning of the restless soul. Awesome. Liz

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on November 1, 2008

Sometimes we feel as if we've lost our soul, yet it is within us but sometimes just out of reach as life affects us. Deep write! Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

Liana,

Soulfully written . . . nicely penned!!

Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

We are never at peace until our soul finds it home in the heart of God where it was birthed in the first place. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

"Why don’t they have remedies From the pain suffocating you?" My favorite line. Beautiful writing with so many questions left to ponder.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

Our soul is found if we look for it. We are never without it, as I understand it. But your write is very interestng about the soul. We need to get out and see the world and not stay in solitude and make friends to find out sould and unite with each other in LOVE.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Intriguing. Many of these thoughts have crossed my mind - often.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

...of the souls eternal longing...you have given me vision in your pen...
well done Liana...
John

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

The entire piece is rich in the heart's lifeblood of yearning...as we all seek the remedy found only in love.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

An outstanding write Liana
Seeking answers we only ask within our minds
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

Deep sentiments in this compelling poem. I pray an answer is found.....M

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Compelling sentiments, Liana. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 23, 2007

Outstanding and intriguing composition. "The Soul" strikes deep concern on all courses of life.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

thought provoking self-reflection ... you should post more of your work ...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 11, 2007

Thought provoking questions you pen, Liana. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on December 10, 2007

Wonderful questioning with a strong poetic feel.
I love these two lines:
"Why don’t they have remedies
From the pain suffocating you?"

Axilea

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 3, 2007

A thought to ponder but I agree with Georg it is we who are blind.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on December 1, 2007

Hi Lina...Wow very deep thoughts
And beautifully expressed yearning
your words left me pondering!!
Outstanding write!!
Love Peace and hugsss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on November 24, 2007

I love the last line~`*

Outstanding...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 11, 2007

Hello Liana,
This is a poem of depth and soul wrenching yearning. I feel a relation to a life from long ago and the struggle to transcend from past pain.
Very well done.
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

a deep and soulful write-well done and thanks for reading and reviewing my work as well

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

these are echoes of my soul --I know what you're going through..oh yes. I KNOW!!

superb work..

V

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 23, 2007

Some fog are gray others are black the color of desperation, it is not the fog that impede us to see, it is because we are blind.
Intriguing poem!
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 22, 2007

You provoke the mind into pondering your thoughts. The soul, held in such high regard, the essence of our being, nicely written...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on October 22, 2007

So many souls and yet therein lays the mystery ... the yearn of the soul is to live and to find it's Destiny...

nice work...

Art Sun...