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Star in Love
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Poetry by Liana Margiva

The merciless Dawn advanced
Sending stars in panicky retreat,
But one stubborn star kept shining
She was not in a hurry to flee.

She had no one to embrace her
Perhaps, dismayed by the treason,
The deceit of another star
She thought was her chosen one,
The one who was the light of her life.

She was waiting for the Sun to rise,
Longing to burn in its scorching inferno,
Disappear without a trace,
Mourning the loss of another
Who failed to live up to her dream.

But the sky was merciful that night,
Envisaging the senseless doom,
It cried out to Nature’s forces
To intervene on its behalf.

Behold, the dark clouds moved in from afar,
Hiding the silly star in their shade
As they shed bitter tears and pleaded
With the Sun to postpone its ascent
Until the love blaze of the martur
Reached the chosen one.

And the majestic Sun acceded
To their desperate plea,
Retreating in seclusion
Until the first blossom of Spring.

Oh, dear faraway star!
Could you also be in love?
Have you known the bitterness of treason?
Your wounded soul will take ages to heal.

Ask the Almighty for me, my distant friend
Why He fills our hearts with worthless people,
Sends us the pain that wouldn’t abate,
Sends us the love which tortures our souls
For many years to come?

By Liana Margiva

Translated from Russian by Anatol Kardiukov


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 Reviews of "Star in Love"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 5, 2010
WELL DONE...A MOST APPROPRIATE QUESTION...WE HAVE ALL HAD SUCH AN INQUIRY AT ONE TIME OR ANOTHER IN OUR LIVES AND THE ANSWER FOR ME ALWAYS IS...'ALL THINGS WORK TOGETHER FOR GOOD, FOR THEM THAT LOVE GOD'... A VERY GOOD WORK, INDEED, LIANA...A HONEST AND REALISTIC LOOK AT 'HEARTBREAK'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Heartfelt and powerfully written Liana!




Much Love,
Always!!

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on February 2, 2009
Whoa! My dearest Liana, I know much of the heartache and disappointment you share so eloquently in "Star in Love." It is impossible to read and understand these lyrics and to not share your pain. Your sharing is brilliant!

But I have learned to experience and move on. And it is with that boldness of nature that I suggest it's time for the two of us to have a "Night out on the town," perhaps a few laps around the dance floor to an upbeat modern rhythm followed by a quiet candle-lit dinner complete with fragrant rose and a nice glass of wine.

Perhaps we can later give thanks for at least the temporary abatement of pain.

It's time, dear Liana. May I pick you up about nine o'clock?

Love,
Richard

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on January 20, 2009
Perhaps so we finally learn the lessons of life and love..by which time it is often too late...but if we are luck, sometimes not....

Love, Diana

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Perhaps it is so that we recognize the real thing when it enters our life (if we're lucky). Touching verse and I like the personification of the star and the conversational tone this piece takes. Most enjoyable! Warmly, Elizabeth

Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Liana,

Skillfully penned . . . well-done!!


Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Maybe it is not clear to us now...but one day,I believe, we will know all answers.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 3, 2008
Dreams of loving don't often come true. But we can dream of love always. Spring is for falling in love too and is called Young love or something like that. It doesn't always last either. The answer to the question may be to test you to see if you would be true to that person and to God also and put God first instead of love for another. We always need to put God first and I do.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
They say we will only carry what our shoulders can carry, I believe we all have to go the distance to get to what we are truely worthy of. Thank you for sharing Liana.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
He never fills your heart with
More than it can handle!
I think is because He
wants us to be strong and learn the
Mining of true love!
Excellent question withing!
Peace Love and hugsss....morning Star

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 23, 2008
Longing for love and acceptance - what each of us desires. This star knows our pain and suffering. Someday we will know the "whys" that plagued us during our life, but until then ...

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
He sends us that pain so we can know true joy and pure unconditional love...
Cryssa

Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Liana,

Heartfelt emotions penned - very well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
A cosmic plight of love that refuses to leave the heavens. Excellent imagery, Liana...these sentiments and emotions can only relate to us who have loved and shall continue to love. Beautiful work.
Amor

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
This beautiful poem is heaveny as a Star
Heartfelt, oustanding and profound
I h've enjoyed reading it very much
Thank You Liana For sharing this jewel
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
A deep engrossing poem filled with many images . I can feel pain and heart felt emotions.......M Thanks for reviewing my work....

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Heartfelt writing dear friend~`*

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Reading this poem I had a sense of déjà vu, like you had said it before, with others words but with the same old painful feelings.
People that carelessly tread on love, are the same that pull flies wings.
Reading this poems make one to wish one could reach and wrap the trembling one with one warmth embrace of tenderness.
Georg

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
Ask the Almighty for me, my distant friend
Why He fills our hearts with worthless people,
Sends us the pain that wouldn’t abate,
Sends us the love which tortures our souls
For many years to come

Pertinent and heartfelt questions, Liana. Thank you for this sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
good questions--well written poem

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
... a beautiful story told...penned with brilliance of a lost star...asking to renew the shine...of lost love.
excellent Liana...
John


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